ok I don't have time to watch the full vid, but based on fast forward observations:

1. don't keep smiling, it's tiring and it defeats the purpose of an actual smile at the right time. it's totally ok to relax your face, looking natural or even serious. you will be more comfortable to present.

2. use a clean background so you and the subject matter is more focused. either a wall or a green screen is good. thumbnail looks awesome but clean background will make it more impressive.

3. don't make your presentation rigid and structured based on a "list", a list is good, but it pressures you to present in a certain way and stutter if you don't. just put some keywords on a large piece of paper in front of you (near the camera), and talk as if you are telling a story to your friend.

4. picture quality good. lighting is ok. sound can be improved (try to minimize bass and echo). the clicking sound of the toy is amazing potential for ASMR, take advantage of that!

5. use cool music for close up shots and subject panning, as a break in between your speech. it adds quality to the vid.

6. title can be catchier (have to clickbait just like any successful channels), instead of a "review", something like "I spent my whole month salary for THIS TRANSFORMER" sounds catchier

that's all i can think of now, but bravo for taking the first step! just keep being consistent with content output!

This post has been edited by J1g54w: Feb 10 2021, 08:06 PM