Come come, please support a fellow Malaysian trying to make it in Youtube. This is the first English review of Haslab Unicron, the largest Transformers toy ever made. He transforms from a planet to a robot!

I had so much fun shooting this, low budget production featuring voiceover and singing by me. I would love to hear your feedback, thank you /k

cukur Unicron

Destroyer of storage spaces.

Incredible. !

Lol, cringey but quite charming la ahboy. I like the enthusiasm.

he sounded like basah down there

Ts u looks gay,are you one?

veli cringey but enthusiastic. too long didnt watch, probably watch 15 good seconds. of it.

You could probably can put those shocked face 1/3 cover your thumbnail, then people tot you're famous hotshot influencer. then go in click click watch.

everest: big

Ok la. Kasih ts chan click in to gib you one view

Comment sikit. Start of the video i sudah pening with your sound effect

This post has been edited by PikachuM: Feb 10 2021, 07:58 PM

Excited lol

meh transformer.
Gundam ftw.

ok I don't have time to watch the full vid, but based on fast forward observations:

1. don't keep smiling, it's tiring and it defeats the purpose of an actual smile at the right time. it's totally ok to relax your face, looking natural or even serious. you will be more comfortable to present.

2. use a clean background so you and the subject matter is more focused. either a wall or a green screen is good. thumbnail looks awesome but clean background will make it more impressive.

3. don't make your presentation rigid and structured based on a "list", a list is good, but it pressures you to present in a certain way and stutter if you don't. just put some keywords on a large piece of paper in front of you (near the camera), and talk as if you are telling a story to your friend.

4. picture quality good. lighting is ok. sound can be improved (try to minimize bass and echo). the clicking sound of the toy is amazing potential for ASMR, take advantage of that!

5. use cool music for close up shots and subject panning, as a break in between your speech. it adds quality to the vid.

6. title can be catchier (have to clickbait just like any successful channels), instead of a "review", something like "I spent my whole month salary for THIS TRANSFORMER" sounds catchier

that's all i can think of now, but bravo for taking the first step! just keep being consistent with content output!

This post has been edited by J1g54w: Feb 10 2021, 08:06 PM

Anyway TS is awesome..

Rich boy

Thanks for the tip bro! Haha but I don't think can pass off as influencer lah, don't have the looks


Thanks for watching bro! Didn't want to infringe copyright, so I improvised with me own sound effects

Wow thanks bro for such constructive feedback! This is very helpful for my future videos, definitely need a better background, and a better mic for ASMR effects would be nice. Thank you so much bro really appreciate

i think 33 min is too long for a video.

make it short 10-15min. good start btw.

lol ts letak smartphone on your head ka

the intro can be improved, I hear also my earphone break

Sorry I only watch Lego channels.