Perhaps you can give your viewers a little background of the food which you are about to cook. Maybe can put 'supporting actors' in your dish such as lettuce/tomatoes to make it more interesting and pleasant to the eyes.
I'm not sure about the others but I'm not really digging the fish eye view.
However, it is still an engaging video though! Another plus point is that the recipe is simple and ingredients are easily accessible too.
Nice work, good editing , keep it up. As a guy who watch cooking show on youtube for almost everyday.
Maybe you can look into Bryon Talbot Video. Clean, Clear, and Quick. Not to mention, the microphone is an investment as well such as Rode. Good Natural Lighting and etc.
Just curious why there is a different resolution video combine? 3:21 and 2:21.
Maybe can include a mukbang eating up your cooking? Simple video editing can be done using phone apps, like cut and paste, effects, audio amplifier etc. But if you use pc software that will give you more controls to play with.
Keep up the good work. I like to watch cooking videos but i never make any of those. Hihi