i think it's not too bad.
but yeah, trying to hard. i fall into that trap.
the young kid, where u shot him through the circle/ hole in the object ?
yeah,.... maybe less of the 'frame' i find it slightly too much of the frame.

the part where u shot the groom(?).... the objects u shot through too much in the way, if u could work on making those objects less obstructive, i think it'll be fantastic.