Awfull you guys.

The pantun I see here is darjah 3 punya pantun.

Offcourse you can get away with pantun that have same syllable in the end word. But to be elegent you gotta have same syllable on every two words for a line that have 4 words.

I dunno how to explain but let me try:

Ikan duri ikan gelama
Ikan nun ikan pari
Game ori diLowyat sana
Game lanun download sendiri

Ikan duri memanglah "lame"
Sembug aerosol peram seminggu
Beli ori Enjoy da game
SoftMod konsol letak pinggu

Ikan diperam jamu George Bush
Lepas makan give me five
Game haram hukumnya haruih
Kena simpan jangan main live

Jamu Goergo Bush di tepi restoran
Kena taun teruih pi jamban
Xbox dah kambuih jadikan pengajaran
Disebabkan lanun rugi 4 billion

Ini cerita janganlah flame
Bush di jamban kena la duk teran
Ekonomi kita bukannya game
Walaupun pengajaran tak payah la heran


There ... I think I got it push to darjah lima pantun. Anyway some of the symbolism here is just in my brain. So don't try too hard. Take it easy

Have phun and please comment.

This post has been edited by haris: Dec 28 2006, 11:15 AM

bro haris you are now our official 360 pantun chief editor!

Nice job, please sent your resume at HR@dewanbahasa.com.my/poem
need gamers freak urgenly

since the thread starter hilang already, let me reply on his behalf.

you guys suck!!!

i ask a simple question but i kena tembak left, right and center. wtf man.

buah cempedak di luar pagar,
ambil galah tolong jolokkan,
saya budah baru belajar,
kalau salah tolong tunjukkan...

usually the TS will follow up with the quote "rich man's son" somewhere in their post.

this thread is for English or BM subject?

Xbox 360, PS Three dan juga Wii
Kalo ade duit semua boleh beli
Bila la forza motorsport nak keluar ni
Kalo delay lagi confirm pegi IMBI order Wii

Kalau tuan pergi ke sg wang,
Carikan saya game lost planet
Kalau tuan tiada wang,
Carikan saya game Pi**tes lost planet



sorry bro PJ or ARJ, joking only

dua tiga kucing berlari,
manakan sama kucing berkutu
orang lain sibuk berpantun di sini,
man soda hilang la mamat gopala tu

its a free country...we can say what ever we want. this is not a communis forum. so F##K ur self dude! bfor say sumthing bad word to other people.

^huh? why so angry? i think all posts after the initial threadstarter are made in jest & for fun only. read thurtin's post again to understand the joke

oh really...thanks god...sorry dude im joking too?u didnt aware that?kekkekeke.let have fun and stay kewl guys

uncle lim want to go painting,
on the way he goes to pantry,
maybe got some misunderstanding
so guys do dont be angry


wahahhahahahah..... pantun 4 kerat in english

uncle lim want to go painting,
uncle lim open shop at genting,
on the way he goes to pantry,
maybe got some misunderstanding
so guys do dont be angry

keke kewl one neway just pretend to be angry to make the forum more hot and funny keke. i love poem. need to write a poem to my gf then keke

Come one, come all,
Let's all go to the mall,
Die die also must buy ori,
If not your console go awry.

Shite, I got infected by all this poemish stuff.

1..2 take off ur clothes
3..4 take off ur pants
5..6 open the door
7..8 say I SUPPORT PIRATED!!!
9..10 we call police

you also kaki pantun already

wtf...spam thread

wtf...spam thread
that's what scpt said
come lengcai and lenglui to this thread
and then we spam kow kow like scpt said


wahahahahha

hi
i better buy an xbox 360 and buy dvd Pirate games and play
DVD Pirate games support XBOX 360 ?
DVD Pirate games for XBOX 360 RM 12.00 and RM 15.00 right ?
DVD Pirate games for XBOX old RM 12.00 and RM 15.00 right ?
help thanks

This post has been edited by gopala33: Dec 28 2006, 04:33 PM