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Rate my final logo, College assignment.
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azxel
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Aug 11 2006, 11:07 AM
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moological mooster
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Firstly, your typography failed. With that, your logo has failed.
If your typo made it through, here are some others... the thickness of the outlines on the boxes are too fat. The jumble of stuff (with the butterfly) in the middle is awful. The animal on the right, (it's a bear, right?) seems like a patch of black thingy.
Lastly, what's with the words "Radical" at the back?
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azxel
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Aug 11 2006, 04:59 PM
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moological mooster
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QUOTE(R a D ! c 4 L @ Aug 11 2006, 11:35 AM) Even though my typo failed, but i've taken into account if i really were playing with typo. I made researches and often logos like this dont need a complicated typography, it needs to be simple and clear. I dont see there's any problem with the typography in here. The animal on the right is actually a seal XD Lastly, hmmm... dont read the 1st post only la dude hmmm, if that's a great idea then im going to try it out. I'll ask the lec whether the logo can be changed in time or not as we progress stage by stage.  thanks for the tips and advices man.  Your typography failed and yet you failed to notice why. You're not a trained designer are you? Then again, a lot of designers make the same common mistakes when it comes to typography. It's not about making your fonts 'complicated' or whatever it means. Neither is it making it 'simple and clear'. I'll give you a hint. Check your letter spacing. Animal on the right is a seal? No offence but I guess you should really look into tracing a better seal and adding in a bit more details. btw, lose the 'wreath' behind it... and now your 'bunga raya' (its a bunga raya right?) looks terrible.. the outlines are too fat.. try balancing ur outlines for all of them.
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