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TSMundane
post Jan 29 2014, 02:49 PM, updated 12y ago

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Hey guys,

As a regular user of JobStreet, I'm curious as to if any of you has a different pitch for different applications? Also, can you provide an example to a great pitch that makes you stand out in your application at JobStreet?
TSMundane
post Jan 29 2014, 03:02 PM

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QUOTE(Randy Marsh @ Jan 29 2014, 02:51 PM)
I use the same pitch for every jobs I apply.  thumbup.gif
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It's tough for me as a foreigner to apply with the same pitch, though. I wonder what other pitches applicants use to make them stand out more.
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post Jan 29 2014, 03:24 PM

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QUOTE(Randy Marsh @ Jan 29 2014, 03:06 PM)
From my point of view, I think you should pick the statement that says the most about you and what you want to be, and make it the highlight of your pitch.

I doubted that employers will read them but I fill it up anyways.
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Yeah, I think so too. I mean, in Australia, most online job boards and all other job ads require applicants to provide both cover letter and resume. I was very surprised that I didn't really need to do one.

By any chance, can you help me review a cover letter I'm about to send to banks and financial institutions? I'm currently looking for a full-time position and have no professional experience in the field and I would very much like an entry-level role and build myself from thereon. I haven't got anyone review it and the Resume/Cover letter thread doesn't seem to be responding so I doubt I'd get early responses.

Can you help me with the favour, please?
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post Jan 29 2014, 03:37 PM

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QUOTE(Randy Marsh @ Jan 29 2014, 03:27 PM)
I don't think I'm qualified to do so but I can give it a try.  thumbup.gif
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Give me some time, reediting the letter.

Edited: Thanks though!

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TSMundane
post Jan 29 2014, 03:55 PM

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Here you go!

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post Jan 29 2014, 04:52 PM

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Yeah, I'm aware. I think it's mostly because of work permit issues and also that having a Malaysian resident or citizen is much more guaranteeing and comforting for them.

Edited: What do you think of the cover letter?

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post Jan 29 2014, 06:09 PM

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Ah, thanks for the feedback guys.

Edited: If you're a foreigner looking for opportunities in the financial service industry, do you list your nationality in your resume?

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