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TSStupid Khor
post May 15 2006, 11:38 PM, updated 20y ago

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Since I see lots of you posting your web design,
I post one of mine too... laugh.gif

It's a discussion board for my school's official site,
but teacher objected my proposal,
hence I had to give up this design,
remake a simple, clean & formal one...

This was my first attempt to graffiti art,
not so cool though......
done after half a month I finished my SPM exam,
and then abandoned...


Firstly, one of the registration pages...
this comes out before the formal agreement,
just a little joke for the users......
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In the registration form, there's a username availability checker,
and this is a sample that comes out after they click the button...
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The error page, appears when there's any error/mistake occurs...
user posted image

and lastly the login page...
user posted image

sorry that the web design has been abandoned before I create the content pages,
so that's all for this template......
if you're thinking to buy the design,
hehe, request it from me, I might give you for free... XD

ps~
yea I know, the colour is burning sharp...
but it's the atmosphere I wished to make, implies HOT... ^^

ps~
shoot me hard, don't bother my feeling...
I need some picky comments...

This post has been edited by Stupid Khor: May 16 2006, 12:11 AM
ikram_zidane
post May 16 2006, 12:16 AM

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seriously.. i can't read any of them.. and where's your school logo ?
btw, what is it for again ?

This post has been edited by ikram_zidane: May 16 2006, 12:19 AM
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post May 16 2006, 12:18 AM

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In not about how great or ARTfull (no such word in dictionary) but how user experience would be. What the point on waiting to load grafitti when all you need is a simple notification whether you have error or not.
TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 12:35 AM

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to ikram_zidane :
these are resized screenshots...
and in my proposal, I proposed to seperate the school website into two parts,
one is the informational part, and another is the e-community...
that means this is the informal one, while another is formal,
hence I didn't included any school logo inside, perhaps I should include one in the header...
btw this is an abandoned project, so I won't waste my time working on it again unless there's any task related to this template or I have the feeling to finish it suddenly...

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to crynobone :
since this is the resized version, you might couldn't see how it looks like in the html formatted webpage...
those fonts are actually pixel fonts (windows built-in fonts: courier new), and the only graphic to load in the error page is the Oops symbol...

I've had lots of consideration for the transfer limit,
so what I did? cache-able flash for the header (so it only loads once),
seemless graphics for borders, and some quality-adjusted jpeg files...
most of the texts are only ordinary texts, not graphical text...
and anothing thing I should tell is all of these are screenshots from Internet Explorer,
which means it's already been neatly transformed to html...

so no worries, it might take a little bit longer to load the graphics, but the texts sure will come out first...

This post has been edited by Stupid Khor: May 16 2006, 12:38 AM
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post May 16 2006, 12:41 AM

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do you have any kind of (x)html document for this paticular template..
TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 12:45 AM

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those are phps... and not validated...
but it works well in all Windows-based web browsers... >.<
TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 12:55 AM

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ok, I've made the full-sized screenshots for those two resized shots... Enjoy shooting... tongue.gif

Agreement :
user posted image

Login page :
user posted image

This post has been edited by Stupid Khor: May 16 2006, 01:05 AM
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post May 16 2006, 07:54 AM

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QUOTE(Stupid Khor @ May 16 2006, 12:35 AM)
to crynobone :
since this is the resized version, you might couldn't see how it looks like in the html formatted webpage...
those fonts are actually pixel fonts (windows built-in fonts: courier new), and the only graphic to load in the error page is the Oops symbol...

I've had lots of consideration for the transfer limit,
so what I did? cache-able flash for the header (so it only loads once),
seemless graphics for borders, and some quality-adjusted jpeg files...
most of the texts are only ordinary texts, not graphical text...
and anothing thing I should tell is all of these are screenshots from Internet Explorer,
which means it's already been neatly transformed to html...

so no worries, it might take a little bit longer to load the graphics, but the texts sure will come out first...
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Not nessecarily, it all depend on how you code it first. Now that I'm talking about is user experience, where let say a dumb n00b come along and the make mistake 5 time then we will show him the Oppsss page 5 times where in reality the notification would be much quicker with use of inline notification or simple javascript, and using your setup the person need to click back button (and if you don't configure php wisely) the person need to start all over again.

Client Side validation again server side who do you think would win? Cacheable also mean that before you can actually load the file from temporary you need to at least load it once. Again it is catchy but wasteful for validation and confirmation. See how Google use in their GMail? Is it artful? No but it's simple but catchy enough.

This post has been edited by crynobone: May 16 2006, 09:10 AM
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post May 16 2006, 09:52 AM

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Lemme say this upfront before telling u wat I think about the design: I'm wearing a TIE ryt now lyk I alwiz do... but I feel like I'm suffocating when I see those design... itz lyk, too heavily done wif graphics... seriously mate.. but since dat was ya abandon project, so, no much harm done.. I can say dat the graphic design was too much... rclxub.gif
itz ok to make ya page looks HOT~ but, no need for eye-strain ryt?


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post May 16 2006, 09:54 AM

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oh, sorry for misunderstanding...
I have 2 levels of validation...
first one is client side,
but to prevent problems (or perhaps hacks),
I've made a server side one...

the javascipt one will simply make an alert,
then focus to the mentioned textbox,
and the server side one will show this kind of error page...

this error page is actually not used to display this kind of errors,
it's used to display those fatal error like fail to connect the database etc...

well, I've changed the setting after remaking the website...
instead of showing the error page,
I print the form again with some notifications on the top...

hehe... me too have done many times of discussion boad scripting before,
so I know most of these user-friendly rules... laugh.gif

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TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 10:02 AM

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QUOTE(r4ydc24 @ May 16 2006, 09:52 AM)
Lemme say this upfront before telling u wat I think about the design: I'm wearing a TIE ryt now lyk I alwiz do... but I feel like I'm suffocating when I see those design... itz lyk, too heavily done wif graphics... seriously mate.. but since dat was ya abandon project, so, no much harm done.. I can say dat the graphic design was too much...  rclxub.gif
itz ok to make ya page looks HOT~ but, no need for eye-strain ryt?
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thanks for your comment... smile.gif

hehe... that was the first time I try raw design...
usually I would make it very simple, neat & clean...
but then I found the designs of Tropicana Life clothes are cool,
and attracting for those youngsters,
so I gave it a try, and made this...

the remaked version is much neater now...
wanna have a look? laugh.gif
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post May 16 2006, 10:09 AM

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Those designs are good if it's for leaflet smile.gif
TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 10:27 AM

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ermm... here's the reconstructed version :
http://forum.lowyat.net/index.php?showtopic=288994
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post May 16 2006, 10:30 AM

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i like the humour you're trying to pull off in the rules but the text might want to be contrasted a lil more. as for the hidden address twirling behind the logo, why do you need it if it's not meant for reading..?

you might want to consider spacing the fonts out a lil more in the main navigation because the grunge is affecting the reading eligibility. i'm wondering if the 'Desserts Back to School is a button' or just a decorative element.

overall, it's a good try and effort of trying to make a place for students to hangout.
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post May 16 2006, 10:41 AM

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hehe... thanks... laugh.gif

for the hidden address... ermmm.....
I tried to add some decorations to make it rawer,
like what those raw designs do...
but I had no idea on what to put,
so... hehe... put that address...
actually that's just for temporary before I come out wt any idea,
but... again, 'coz it's been abandoned......

the navigation in the full scale look is better,
though it's been crazily distorted too... tongue.gif

those are buttons,
but actually 'back to' is the background,
'desserts' and 'school' are two buttons...
'desserts' is an entertaining website I created for a competition,
and I proposed to collaborate with the school website, but rejected...
'school' is the 'formal' part of the school website,
where every information can be found inside...

well, I admit it's a failure on making them distinguishable,
I'll try again next time (if there's any chance)... smile.gif
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post May 16 2006, 10:46 AM

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QUOTE(Stupid Khor @ May 15 2006, 11:38 PM)

It's a discussion board for my school's official site,
but teacher objected my proposal,
hence I had to give up this design,
remake a simple, clean & formal one...

This was my first attempt to graffiti art,
not so cool though......
done after half a month I finished my SPM exam,
and then abandoned...
Firstly, one of the registration pages...
this comes out before the formal agreement,
just a little joke for the users......
ps~
yea I know, the colour is burning sharp...
but it's the atmosphere I wished to make, implies HOT... ^^

ps~
shoot me hard, don't bother my feeling...
I need some picky comments...
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may i know which school are you? well, i am not really interested in your school name, but more to what type of school it is.

if your school is some sort of smjk or smk or sbp, then the graffiti design may not suits it. graffiti indeed is an art. but when it is related to school and teenager, especially sekolah menengah, then the word "vandalism" normally comes along.

it doesnt matter if your school is some sort of art and design school, maybe something like limkokwing etc? then the graffiti design may be usable.

but for sekolah menegah kebangsaan, even though the teachers may like it, they sure need to consider the design deeply ...this is to protect the image of the school.

that is my humble opinion.
TSStupid Khor
post May 16 2006, 11:00 AM

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thanks for your opinion... smile.gif

ermm..... mine is smjk...
this website is considered a hidden part of the school website in my proposal...
I proposed to make a formal design, for the informational part,
which is the main part of our school website...
and this is the hidden part, where the target audience is only the students, not even the teachers...
it'll be just a place like kopitiam, discussing whatever they like...
hence I hoped to make it cachy for teenagers,
and hoped our students can communicate with each other better,
at least make more friends in school,
'coz it needs no meeting and shyness to make a friend on the internet...

I knew it's quite unacceptable, but I wished to give a try,
and hopefully our school will be the only smjk which has a portal like this......
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post May 16 2006, 11:10 AM

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QUOTE(Femi @ May 16 2006, 10:09 AM)
Those designs are good if it's for leaflet  smile.gif
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I'm totally agree wif u sistah! the design makes one awesome gig leaflet..

 

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