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 I've editted my letter, please leave comments, urgent~need help

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MaXfly
post Apr 17 2006, 01:29 PM

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QUOTE(smileypig @ Apr 17 2006, 12:32 PM)

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Throughout my high school, I have an excellent academic record and even until now, I
still manage to maintain a high level of academic achievement, which is a CGPA of 3.8/4.0.

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just a suggetion:
I had maintained an excellent academic record thoughout my high aschool, currently studying at xxx college, my CGPA is 3.8.

I think you should shorter some of sentences; try to keep you letter to the point. short & simple without using too many word filler.

 

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