i've just made a logo for some cafe. They sell rojak fruit and juice..

My design its totally simple... I need opinion/idea.
Maybe Senior member or Expert can tell/advise me, how to make it more better..

Thanks!

Overall good try.

You might want to lose the gold outlining the yellow, as right now the focus looks more towards the pineapple then to the fonts. You could play more with colour schemes and maybe with more fonts and maybe give your fonts a little spacing between for some breathing space.

Maybe you could tell us your concept and idea for your client before we further analyze it that way we have a better understanding.

cheers.

Thanks 4 ur opinion.

because there's lots of fruit stuff at their cafe, so i take pineapple as a logo. Pineapple represent one of element from fruit rojak.

and the cafe its for mid-high level customer.

This post has been edited by ardhawk: Mar 25 2006, 08:33 PM

-can add a lil contrast to the logo by using more vibrant color , eg. fresh orange

-try with different font type that brings out the tropical feel, times font are for oldies.

-balance the logo

jus a lil bit tweak from yr original then u can get a great logo edi

This post has been edited by eddychstu: Mar 26 2006, 02:51 PM

Hm, what do you mean by balance the logo and little bit tweak?? Still not understand..

Edi...?? heheh..

u might wanna adjust ur plain boring "tropicana cafe" font



imho of course

miyabi rawks! watch edi the ozawa in 6 costumes??

arrrggghhh!!!

the Pineapple!! the Pineapple!! take it away!!!!!
those words in those fonts and in Black!!! take it away!!!!! take it away!!!!!

I honestly hope that you didn't study graphic design.

Try something simpler by modifying one of your alphabetical characters into a tropical object or fruit.

i take CS degree lar,
not design course like you

ahh.. say so first la.

p.s. In my 3 year diploma, I hardly attended the classes. Always arrive late, drops bags, sit for a while, sembang, go out for makan, go arcade, go yumchar, come back college, copy assignments, sleep thru some classes like Art History and Photography, leave college for work.

Naughty Boy....

sorry to make u down, the logo looks like fruit store!

Thread close.. Thanks For all your opinion, guys!

Honestly, like someone mentioned earlier, it looks like a Pineapple cafe.

Theres plenty other ways to represent "tropicana". Rethink!

As for balance, imagine your logo on a balancing scale. Draw a line through the middle of your logo. Your pineapple will be on one side and your text on the other. Do you feel the pineapple would look heavier than the words? If yes, hence unbalance.

If you're adamant about using this logo, try arching the text around the logo. Instead of a long horizontal logo, make it radial, maybe with a frame around it. (erm.. think starbucks?)

And do, lose that yellow line underneath the words "TROPICANA"

It serves no purpose.

This post has been edited by Chemical: Mar 30 2006, 04:38 PM

yeah.. it look's like pinapple cafe rather than tropicana cafe..
take the pineapple away.. try put in coconut tree.. feel's a bit 'tropicana', i suppose.. tree huh.. don't put in cononut shell.. haha.. try it out and see..
but the font is quite ordinary.. but looks ok too.. simple but nice..