atlast..come out..with my an hour..logo design..

Rate my work
no frame up here..pls..



This post has been edited by kokanchai: Mar 19 2006, 08:14 PM


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This post has been edited by kokanchai: Mar 19 2006, 08:15 PM

could you resize it......... its too large to be viewable....... a standard logo size would be ok

I can't view your logo!

not bad~ keep up the good work! !! can design 1 for me? jk~

i like logo without embossed effect.. and the red color for the left one is too bright.. not so sooth the curve (probably cuz the effect)...
anyway.. nice logo design.. what is it for ??

Well, its okay i guess... but i doubt you'll be able to sell it though. like they say, practice makes perfect, so hopefully you'll get better & better in the future yeah ?

urm.. u need a concept.. badly..

the two fonts are not complementing each other, as i feel that they are not coherent, aka don't mix well... It's a simple design which is easy on the eye, but like etsuko mentioned, it doesn't have a theme or concept to it...

is the logo do represent 'endless' or 'life' ? i dont think the logo itself represent both of the words.

Any words or themes that represents a logo should be bigger than any object or icons in the design itself and wrong choice of colors

I dont like that "ENDLESS" Font and yellow shadow at "Life"...

im just beginer... just ignore it if u think im wrong.. k

first of all.. for me logo mean identity.. then u should put what meaning of ur logo..
i think ur font "ENDLESS" and "Life" not mm..mm.. match..
ur colour.. 3 deffrent tone of red.. why?
try not to used embossed.. IMHO

thanks..

You lack of creativity...

I have to say this, your brains are wayyy too simple.

And for those fonts, they do not match at all. And the 'endless' font is horrible.

go get urself a decent refference book

Love what u say.



Well, if there's any company that uses this logo, that company's branding effort will go down the drain straight away.

Last minute work won't help and it's wasting our effort to rate it. next time at least show us work that u've spend at least 40 hours in thinking and executing it.

4 me , to simple...
n dun c any motive of diz logo

umm... IMHO, I think that's it's pretty bad.
Typography is totally out.
The way the 'curve' is positioned also seems a bit off.
The logo itself and the word 'endless life' doesn't seem to tie up.

0.25 out of 5 from me...

i post my Art here..
not to let u guys fire me up..

i just wan some feedback..
not to toward on me..

Songhan99:i admit that i am lack of creativity..neither u are in the first time too?heh

TearDrop:the way of mine are to simple?not until u can judge me..u think that u are the best of Among??hell..to over self confident..didnt u?

exkay:if u think that..it wasting ur precious time to rate it..why dont u just brush of tis Topic..it really none of ur concern to rate it..

Shiitake: ya..it simple..that wat i request for it..( abt those word..i just simply put in)

azxel:i know my Typography is sux..but if u think u can come up..a nice design better then me..go ahead and do it..not need to pretend a generous jugde..in here..heh..

hi bro kokanchai... sorry to said.. for me when u ready to be Critique u have tu accept what ever people said in positive way... try to take it and make it to u to get improve..

this is brainwash... IMHO..

goodluck..

ulalala!
sound like u angry huh?!
kewl!
feedback n critique isn't same ka?
at least we all tell da truth mah!

seriously dude... critism is feedback.. it'll not always be '"i love it" or "that's superbly cool" or "*good comment*".. escpecially for newbies (in this paticular case, you !).. if you're scared of being commented , then don't post.. i pity you but there's nothing i can do to back you up.. they're right ! and my rating would be 0.2 over 5..


This post has been edited by ikram_zidane: Mar 21 2006, 06:43 PM

-- i admit that i am lack of creativity,
-- i know my Typography is sux.

so tell me what have u learn at your instituion mr kokanchai. is this a fresh graduates level?

oh.. at first you asking for feedbacks. but u expecting we kiss your a** is it? same like your old thread.. if you afraid of bad critiques, dont come and said "please give feedback for my work". haha funneh.

dude...in my honest opinion, u wont get far wiff computer graphix design industries wiff dis kind of attitude...but then how old are you aniway?

every art/design must have its own story...meaning u have to do ur research before u simply play wiff adobe product...

lets say, "endless" ...what can u relate graphic wiff da subject? how do u make when we people see the logo we will remember in our brain dat dat is "endless"?

aiseh...um bad in explaining...next time when u want an honest comment, and people say it sux, u must / need to hear em and take it in positive way la..

improve, exposure,patient,hardwork and lastly understand the whole idea by doing research

regards!

i am gladful u guys hv a good feedback on me..

but some of our frd..mention that..

TearDrop Posted Today, 01:43 PM
I have to say this, your brains are wayyy too simple.

wat is tis mean by?
am i brainless or sumthing?
or i just f***ed up?

giving feedback..out..is good..
not directly spam rude to the major point..
cant u talk in a polite ways?

This post has been edited by kokanchai: Mar 21 2006, 08:58 PM

Come let me get this straight.

Asking for feedback over some lousy piece of work and expects comments like 'GOOD! NICE! BEAUTIFUL!'?

Critics is the best way to improve your work god damn it. I can say your work is barely worth 2/5 marks and I believe most people here agree with me. And if you cant take critics as a feedback to improve your damn work, whats the point of being a designer? Not everyone’s taste is as bad as yours.

What do you want from a lousy piece of work? Good comments? Go screw the tree.

'your brains' - there's an 's' there.. meaning there's more than 1..

Did i say you are brainless? Did i say you are f*ucked up?

What im trying to say is the way you look at things are way too simple. The creativity is not there.

Get it?

cool down people...

come come lets hug each other and promise ourself that, we must improve