it seems that u have got alot of wedding jobs lately, kudos to u on that.
and it seems that i have less to talk now as u've improved from the last one.
all and all i think u did a marvelous job considering the space is limited and the venue might not be drop dead gorgeous. congratulations buddy.
i wud tho, talk about lighting. seems that some of the places the lighting is not evenly lit. this might be because of the iso value and i assume ur using demb flash diffuser? i wud personally use these modifiers on places where i cant bounce my flash. say pic no 17 n 18, its in a house i assume, and there's a not-so-high ceiling top. i wud bounce my flash without any modifiers at all. imo it looks better, not giving that flat looking pics. to execute this one must know how to bounce a flash.
other than that, i really dont have any objections as i think u did a great job capturing these images.
and buddy, all of this is just my opinion meaning = what i think is nice to my eyes. the most important is it must look good to ur client's eyes. so u r free to disagree with me

no hard feelings ya

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