it my first..free lunch..Job
that i recieved..
(The Company is abt Rental Transportation)
Triple X is thier name..


altought i am still a fresh graduate..
but i wanan try out my self and level..
hope u guys..can give me some feedback and guide..

thanks!


This post has been edited by kokanchai: Feb 27 2006, 01:35 AM


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now only i know this world got free lunch...

2.5 out of 5
4.5 out of 10

dun ask me why... lolx...

mayb u should tell me more ur concept...then i can rate for u

O_o

Somehow i think the sketch doesn't goes with the color scheme....

is it just me?

(btw, i am a n00b in art .. no talent at all )

wah..the result reaction..so bad meh?
i wanna cry..
it took me..nearly 2 days..to think abt the design concept..


wells..say..i am not that..creative..minded thinking..
are they..any other ways..can build up..with some creative idea and thinking?

sob sob..

This post has been edited by kokanchai: Feb 27 2006, 01:40 AM

I like the overall flow of colors but you can definitely improve on the typo.

make it lighter?

---------------------------------> UGLY

agree... i think ur typo got something wrong.. dunno wat izzit... jus feelin its wrong or not ngam...

i not in design... but i see quite okie la...
keep on the good work....

Refreshing, if you think your oneliner helps him in anyway you deserve a 1 finger salute.

i saw there are 2 "Tripe X" there...

why dun u make the bottom 1 more bright and as ur title?

the second thg... 2 balls at the top car... what is tat? spotlight?

hmmm ganbatte
still can improve

First of all could you behave a little bit more mature, your a fresh graduate and you behave in this manner? If you cant receive critics and comments then please dont ask for any. Can you at least do the simplest thing to at least tell us what is your brief is (be a little professional la).

Overall I think the design is tacky and can be improved alot more if you do more research on what your designing upon.

do u mind ur concept when designing this art work?

explain ur concept

the texture like low quality wan?
u make wan ar?

well art really depend on people and effect in diffrent type of qulity printing,paper as well as colour.
well your picture look a bit too dull...when come to advertise it actually can't see much from it....need to creat something that have effect of 3D for this..

actually not really that bad.... for me i think was too much gradiant at the side ... and the 2 shotlight logo was look cheap .... which area u need to concernted u really need to think about it.... that all my comment.... kepp it up !!! u can do it

agree...

I have to say the big TripleX logo is not badly done especially the X part. Welldone for that part.

But yet, there are alot of weakness in that piece of work.



1. Watermarks. To be honest, i do not get why are there watermarks? Not to say a good piece work dosen't have watermarks but those watermarks were just wrongly placed. Especially on top of pictures. Let it look clear and simple.

2. Again. Pictures are better not hidden especially behind titles. Be proud of the picture. Show them and not hide them especially behind important infomations.

3. I have to say the effect dosent suite the background colour. And the effects are badly done.

4. A good piece of work only need 1 title.

All the above comments are just my 3cents. I would rate this work 4 out of 10. There's alot of room for improvement.

This post has been edited by TearDrop: Mar 6 2006, 02:36 AM