i noticed that the left is .. err.. kinda.. smaller ..a lil bit too small even by perspective

well.. dats just me

i noticed .... are u into realism >?

nope. even that actually is smaller....

there is a big big error i forget to check.

left hand seems smaller and ...
this may be perv of me (which im always am) the lower part of the chest plate ... theres a bulging something something between her crotch ..

perspective doesnt feel right.

nope

you draw out the corect and see , don't just say "feel not right"

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okay la, answer out, how you shoot the arrow with that pose?

weew the right hand suppose to be on a different side

ok later la.

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is that me or the picture kena stretched ?

yeah quite

but to me, its just an impression of how human looked like.

kinda

okay aside the stretched picture lah,
colour wise very good already

just the right hand the 2 fingers is little stiff for me la.

head the ear position not sure is high or you actually tilt the head down

and the right shoulder part i dont think the "valley" can be this sharp

So as u can see the right leg is a little bit off la. And obviously u didnt spend much time on getting the structure right, thats y ur character look very flat. For me, if the basic structure is wrong then the rest are waste of time.

you want shooting pose? cuz ur drow is aiming at the ground . That 1 on the right is a pose i would prefer to draw la, she looks more confident to me. But that is personal taste la.

^^
superb broo !!!

agito obviously a little bit lacking on character posing

but u brotha, clearly an experienced one

I think Agito always want a sexy pose of his girls..but bro your technical is superb!

owh, that's it. thanks for your time for show ing me this, it is more clearer instead of just tokkok like someone
also i purposely do like that so other stalking people can read it
it is more easy to absorb like this format

about that pose, i refer to shunya yamashita most of the standing pose one, mix a bit la, lazy man one-leg-standing pose, senget your spine one... but i think i did too much make it weird.

and the shooting pose, that is not i wanted lol, just half pulling string pose

if really want to do aiming pose i already refer to thsoe typical hollywood poster like that


P/s: the leg armor really like that, i want try make larger for that part like bell-bottomed pants
bottom part is i try to resketch pose before you draw the fixing thingy.. >_<
you are right, now i try fixing that haha if got time...


This post has been edited by Agito666: Jun 25 2013, 11:52 AM

fast draw more nub thing and let him correct yours so we can see nice things

that kind of aiming pose very difficult to draw yo..

I remember oncce my lecturer told me this..here are 3 different views of a gun:


top gun looks very boring.

the middle gun not only readable but also interesting. This view very popular for concept design as it is the most simple n effective.

the bottom...very difficult to read n boring becuz you cant show a lot of info about the object. Not that it is hopeless but to make it interesting you need to have very very good skill, lighting, details, atmosphere, colors, etc...everything must go chun!

My point is it is a tough pose to draw