My attempt at writing, Please comment
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 Jan 16 2006, 10:30 AM, updated 20y ago
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798 posts Joined: Apr 2005 From: Equine Park, Seri Kembangan 
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Hi guys/gals,
I recently trying to wrote a story set in a distant future. Could you guys lend me some eyes and read it. Please do comment on it so I could improve it further. The story is at: http://www.chrisalsyt.blogspot.com This post has been edited by PhoenixByte: Jan 16 2006, 10:31 AM |
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Jan 17 2006, 10:19 AM
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Thanks for taking the time to visit.
DragLung, Do you mean the actual pdf files or the entry that describes the chapters? If it's the pdf files, then I'll make the next chapter longer. |
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Jan 17 2006, 12:27 PM
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StarGhazzer,
Ok..point noted. I've changed it as u have suggested. Thanks for taking the time to visit my story blog. |
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