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TSlacer72
post Apr 15 2012, 12:30 PM, updated 14y ago

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First try on sunset shoot at Teluk Kumpar Penang.
All C&C welcome.

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Thank for view.
Ask_Yip
post Apr 15 2012, 03:01 PM

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White balance is weird
geekster129
post Apr 15 2012, 03:43 PM

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I can never get tired with sunset pics. They are the best things in landscape photography.

For #2, I can see a human subject as a dark sillhouete, but if the person could be positioned somewhere to the left part of the scene as a foreground shadow, the pic could have look stronger.

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TSlacer72
post Apr 15 2012, 03:55 PM

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Thank for the CnC give.
The WB is weird mean too red n yellow?
I use auto WB for this shoot; may need more explain on how the setting should i set for the shoot? Thank.

Yea, agree with you, if the girl can be more left and get full ppl shadow, the whole photo may look complete. Just the girl is just somebody walk and stand in front when i on the shoot. Hahaha. Dun know is funny or plus for me.


Added on April 15, 2012, 4:24 pmWill this shoot look better WB?

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Ask_Yip
post Apr 15 2012, 05:55 PM

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Too much yellow to me, and it looks like only one colour tone (yellow) only inside the picture.


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post Apr 15 2012, 06:02 PM

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Hope you don't mind:

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Adjusted WB and strong contrast with LR 3 smile.gif
TSlacer72
post Apr 15 2012, 06:32 PM

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sure i dun mind. as get comment here.
But is that the adjust lose the sunset feel?
With the adjust pic you attach "Adjusted WB and strong contrast with LR 3".

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post Apr 15 2012, 06:44 PM

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QUOTE(lacer72 @ Apr 15 2012, 06:32 PM)
sure i dun mind. as get comment here.
But is that the adjust lose the sunset feel?
With the adjust pic you attach "Adjusted WB and strong contrast with LR 3".
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To me is more the personal preference, I found more colour in a pic will make it look more interesting smile.gif

Let's see what is other sifu's comment smile.gif
TSlacer72
post Apr 15 2012, 06:59 PM

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Thank for your comment so much.
i have feel the pic is too yellow and red tone, but when adjust, the sunset feel is lose for my view.
As this shoot take without any filter, just direct setting and 18-200mm lens.
1st pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/250 shutter speed, aperture f11.
2nd pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/250 shutter speed, aperture f11.
3th pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/200 shutter speed, aperture f11.

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post Apr 15 2012, 08:23 PM

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Colour is weird and not interesting enough. Model could've made a jump or something, though.
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post Apr 15 2012, 09:36 PM

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Didn't know Teluk Kumbar has this interesting place to get sunset :/
TSlacer72
post Apr 16 2012, 06:34 PM

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Is behind the thai seafood restaurant. But the view not much to take.

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post Apr 17 2012, 10:26 AM

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post Apr 17 2012, 11:09 AM

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QUOTE(lacer72 @ Apr 15 2012, 06:59 PM)
Thank for your comment so much.
i have feel the pic is too yellow and red tone, but when adjust, the sunset feel is lose for my view.
As this shoot take without any filter, just direct setting and 18-200mm lens.
1st pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/250 shutter speed, aperture f11.
2nd pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/250 shutter speed, aperture f11.
3th pic set: ISO100, focal Length 18mm, 1/200 shutter speed, aperture f11.
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WB is a subjective matter, some prefer cooler WB in the pic, some prefer warmer.... there is not such right or wrong, just a personal feeling on the picture.

For me, your picture #1 under expose at the left side. If you could give up the left side, shot in longer focal length, that might give other impact.

picture #2, just like geekster129 said, ur human subject was block by the tree, move the human to left side, or just dunwan to put human in your picture

And, lastly, shooting at seaside, try step down aperture, shot in longer shutter speed (given you have tripod, or something to support your camera), and see the different.
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post Apr 17 2012, 01:52 PM

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Ya, thank for the advice. will try to learn more with aperture and longer shutter.
My friend also add to me need to takecare of 3 rules for landscape shoot.


 

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