1.

2.

3.

4.

5.

6.

7.

woah ahmoi

now we talking quality amoi

pretty girls gallery

1) This subforum is for posting photographs and related discussion such as technique and execution (lighting, composition, posing, makeup etc.). Discussion about photographers or models is prohibited.

----------

that said, good try. need to work on composition and attention to details.

for example, try to avoid vertical or horizontal lines or objects cutting across, especially on the head. (refer #1 and #2).

#2 also lacks eye-contact, expressionless and having other distractions, like the beam on the left.

careful on stuff like armpit in #5, makes the photo less appealing.

good try! keep up the good work!

IF ONLY the bubble is not there in #6

agreed, there is a miss timing on shot on #6, got that bubble in the way

if there was a very slight additional light on #1, it will be nice, kinda dark on the btm half of body

This post has been edited by noobandroid: Feb 18 2012, 03:19 PM