The only think I feel lacking is that It doesn't have the feel of a school magazine. A model (a high quality pic of student with school uniform - added some dreamy effect) would do a trick.

Anyway do choose a clearer font for your school name. It feel that as if you are a shame to put it there. Strike it out so when people see it they would definitely see (readable).

All your design are rather crowded and over-colored. Is seem to be like you are actually making an "un-official" wallpaper rather than an official book/magazine cover. Explore more example of finish artwork by others.

As for Navigator's I already said what I need to say.

P/S: But I were to choose from either one of your, I have to say Navigator's slightly more suitable for a cover since minimum improvement

In that case, I alway going to have a good laugh if I see the actually copy, and I don't think anyone can get far with those kinda of attitude.

Temper, temper

What are you mumbling about. I said yours looked like a wallpaper design (it's not the same as designing a magazine cover). I didn't say anything about who's a CnP or not, eventhough maybe Navi's got the background from some wallpaper he (or she) has manage to manipulate it to work nicely as a cover.

I gave a cincai comment already got this. n00b, if I use totally bad comment they complain, if other give this comment also complain. Next time, don't ask people if you can't accept negative comment unless your a damn pro.

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