entombed zvz
1) early game abit sloppy but he didnt punish you for that when he had like 17 roach to your 1 roach count. he could have out right killed you.

2) the main problem in the game is you didnt spend your money as well as your opponent. you were about 20-30 supply behind throughout the 2-3 base stage and you constantly have like 1.5k mineral floating. while your opponent kept his money low. basically both of you were macroing hydra roach out of 3 base 3 queen. but he injected better and spent his money btr. so he won during the engagement. he got way more stuff than you. its all about injecting and making army.

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Added on February 4, 2012, 2:09 pmentombed zvt

1) again, open pool 1st

2) why you make both bane nest and roach warren? unless you are planning to all in....but you didnt...well, some ppl dno how to deal with early game tank pushes. just use mass lings....banes might help. but definitely not roaches, roaches sucks in tvz.

3) why you rush to brood lord? wheres your muta harrass? well, he wasnt good enough to capitalize on the fact that you rush to BL. BL rushing is very weak to all kind of attacks.

4) spend your mmoney btr. not spending them by double expanding, spend them by making army. its army that wins you game, not drones.

5) make 2-3 spines at your further expos, they are quite good against drops.

6) dont morph all your corrupters into BL, you need more corrupters than BL to deal with the vikings. see the ending? sad. owh, you could have used tranfuse but either way you are going to lose because he had so many vikings. use infestor to fungal them. anyway, you shouldnt rush to BL, use mutas to stop the terran from macroing, because rushing to BL means you cant put pressure on terran, he is going to max out soon and you are going to die.

7) how to micro BL. ok, BL is to force tanks to unsiege, so you dont sack all your lings to attack the tanks. and BL sit back do nothing. totally wrong. you let your BL hit the marines, then let tanks splash damage to damage the marines. then terran will unsiege to protect his own marine. thats when you flood your lings in to attack the unsieged army.

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Added on February 4, 2012, 2:13 pmthats all for now....basically just know when to spend your money. and i realized you hiccup too much on overlord supply cap........thats very bad. learn when to make overlord. even when i offrace as zerg, i rarely supply cap. umm....after about 50 supply, always make sure you have about 10 free supplies. after 1 round of inject, depends on how many supply worth of unit you are making, replenish same worth of ovie.

tho your hotkeys are not really nice, those dont really matter yet. fix your supply and money spending, can at least bring you to be a solid diamond.

Remember D O C S I

Drone saturation.

Always check ur drone saturation.
make sure its 22(mineral) + 6(gases) on main, natural, third.

aim for midgame 75-80 drone count. (10-12mins)
replace drones u use for gas/buildings

ovie timing.

1 ovie at a time : 15 pool first/17FE, 26, 32, 40
2 ovie at a time : after 44-100
3 ovie at a time : 100-150
maxed it out     : 150-200

another tips. use hatch larvae for ovies. inject larvae for units.
or. spare one inject larvaes for ovies.

ALWAYS USE UR LARVAE. dont leave it idle. do something.

Creep spreading

watch minimap. see purple area. not far enuf? moarrr creep tumorrrrr.

Scouting

always have a spotter infront of opp base. (ling, highground ovie, wtv) just make sure u know when the push is coming.

spotter on every possible expo (third,4th,5th....99th)

WATCH MINIMAP. ALWAYS.

ur eye cycle shud be.
-TOP RIGHT (supply/money)
-BTM MIDDLE (status)
-BTM LEFT (minimap)

cant see anything on opp base? send ovie in. it doesnt hurt.

Injects

not much i can give u on this. since its personal preference. for me. tapping works best.

tap queen. got energy? inject
inject dy? creep tumor

thats all from me. GLHF

i mean..the newest replays...
i cant just jump around n take older replays,since that replay wud be outdated (patch changed for example)

why do u always zoom in for no reason?

watched arid plataue.

1) always open hatch 1st against terran. i tot you like macro play? pool 1st is quite bad

2) no1 makes 72 drone and have 4 lings 10 minute in the game. and only make lings after you see enemy push. its too slow.

3) dont make roach warren unless you see hellion.

4) after lair, research baneling nest

5) always have a handful of army... cuz if you see opponent push only you make lings, you still need to morph into banes. all these takes time. and you dont want to give him time to siege up.

6) why you cancel your natural hatchery at 1st?

losing is goooood. http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessag...topic_id=176970

TLDR http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessag...topic_id=208343

heyhey, watched ur replays. u're not a bad player, i think u could make diamond pretty soon if u play more. i think if u're terran u coulda been diamond/masters already. im sorry im not much of a zerg player, cant help u much with proper builds, i gotta admit zerg is harder to play when i got a low brain processing speed.

what u can do now is continue to play more games, give more thoughts on ur games when u're not playing cuz when it comes to playing time, u wont have much time to think, u're gonna keep remembering stuffs like ur brain flipping around pages. as u play ur memory improves and eventually an action will become a habit, stuffs like spreading creep, rallying overlord, larva inject will become automatic.

i think other stuffs like watch replay/stream/gsl for build orders/timings and buildorders/timings to watch out for needs no telling right
yeah both can be right, however i dont like strict dos and donts. things like 11/11 111 222 14hatch, 11rax,12rax,12gateway. many ppl learn them in the wrong way, im not saying those bo are wrong but if u do everything efficiently u will learn that 123 rax is 123 rax just in time when u have 150 minerals up+worker travelling time. efficiency is really all that matters.

i learn the game by focusing on winning, whatever shit cheese/play that i can do to win easy. my friend practice by going standard build everygame and focus on macro and defending cheese, but he had broodwar experience. I think both way works as long as u get ur basic right 1st! i still have problem with my control though, bad habits are hard to break x_x