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My full work is composed of a collection of photos, should you have an interest, please visit my full work here



I would really appreciate it if you can let your thoughts be known to me in this thread after you have seen my work.

I would be grateful for any feedback at all as they are valuable for my experiment’s progress. Thank you =)





Experimental Concept

My artwork is about combining all the impression generated from of all photos of my subject. In every set I have more than 30 photos, all displayed in a specific format arranged to simulate the layout of a Triptych but modified to for website publish

If you wish for a graphical example of what I have in mind, you may refer to Egyptian paintings where they tell a story using the combination of impressions from multiple points within the painting itself

You must consider all of these photos plus the words in my article about the model for it to work. Its sort of like a macro scale kind of thing.

My experiment is about being able to accurately express a person using this means.


Approach

I capture my subjects exactly as they are despite what she says about herself and what she does in the pictures

I minimize my influence and bias in the subject by providing minimal direction and art guidance, hence minimizing influence contamination.

Everything in the photos, everything in each word and sentence belongs to the subject and none of mine.

All of this raw data is completely up to the audience to process and interpret to their heart’s content =D

Telling me your interpretation will definitely help me a lot ! So please do =)

As for the background and place i choose, this sort of captures an element of fate to my work. Its like it is fate that we have to shoot at this place at this particular moment ( i hope i am making sense )

This post has been edited by Wholleymolley: Jan 15 2012, 10:33 PM

isn't the face tad bit over exposed. also it'll be nice if u eliminated the background shadow

@rubrubrub
Exposure is fine. it's the midtone which is too strong.


@john,
#1, #2, #3
highlight and catch light is there which is good.
midtone is way too much on face.
shadow too much on hair it make the hair lost it details.

all these can be correct using pp.

my 2 useless cent.

I will next time =)



Thanks a lot my friend, I will correct them in my next chance =)