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junkieG
post Oct 24 2005, 06:01 AM

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From: Sue Bunk Jai Yaa!


QUOTE(soggie @ Oct 14 2005, 02:04 PM)
What do you think about this design? It is targeted for a floral company, or gift company and it is supposed to exhibit e-commerce styled behavior. It is only in its draft stages, so waht do you think?

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Just in case you turned off images, here's the link:

http://www.rendervault.com/storage/images/preview.jpg
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i think u lack of creativity here wiff "ur" templet a.k.a "draft stage"

in order to improvice imho, make it ( imean make ur own PSD FILES and, not by using "free templet and then paste unkewl flower picture) flex.gif colorful la ...dis is too dull and boring and not "flowerish"

the templet ur using to me is more suitable for buying ak-47 or pentium 4 EE dual core thumbup.gif


my humble advise, pls make if more "alive like a fresh flower that blooms right after the blardy morning glory bla bla bla rather then being "autumn" (betui ke aku eja?) boring, plain, dull,sengal bla blabla

another thing, pls la dun use templet...so unoriginal!
ouh well imho of course


junkieG
post Oct 25 2005, 04:02 AM

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From: Sue Bunk Jai Yaa!


QUOTE(soggie @ Oct 24 2005, 09:17 AM)
I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you meant by "pls la dun use templet"... can you elaborate more on that?

EDIT:

I think you misunderstood that I'm ripping off another person's template and just putting in some flowers and that's it? Well to clarify, every single pixel on that image I posted up here, is 100% conceived from my own photoshop, on my own computer. The flowers come from google images, which I believe are copyrighted, in which I will have to discard sooner or later in favor for original flower images, but the other things you see such as the layout, the ribbon, the wording and every single thing is my own work, not a work of others where i copied. I have the PSD file if you want to look at it.

On second thought, I think that's a compliment from you. To be able to fool people into thinking "this looks like a pro template... can't possibly come from a malaysian. he must've ripped it off somewhere", I think that pretty much gives me an extra boost of confidence laugh.gif notworthy.gif

Thanks!
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i've read ur post earlier dis evening... honestly my face impression is like ohmy.gif doh.gif


as always, cant sleep....

i got sum free time now...so dis is whut i wanna say ...propably my last post/comment on your design...its gonna be sux for you, but just take it like a professional man emmmkay sayang? wub.gif tongue.gif

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but the other things you see such as the layout, the ribbon, the wording and every single thing is my own work, not a work of others where i copied


u wanna know why i assume ur work is from "others template"? (except for the ribbon and flower....will discuss bout dis later)

simply becoz, of ur words....u r "creative" enuff to do ur layout and color scheme but u not creative enuff to put bla bla bla on ur text? ussually people will just leave it blank if they dun have the copy writing...but u are like soooo imaginative put chainsaw blade lar, assult rifle lar, bla bla bla even a f-15 fighting falcon?! wtf? obviously u ripoff sumone else template! pls ...dun stand wiff the...aiseh donno how to describe regarding ur "from scratch" attitude...u sound so &^*&%*(&%^ imho


secondly, i vote for What the fish is that? (yeah dats me) simply becoz,

I double dare you to print your "ribbon" and just show it to ur mom or if u would like to embarrass ur self more, show it to ur neighbour and ask them whut does the picture (ribbon) looks like...
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To be able to fool people into thinking "this looks like a pro template... can't possibly come from a malaysian. he must've ripped it off somewhere", I think that pretty much gives me an extra boost of confidence laugh.gif notworthy.gif

ur ribbon is not realistic bro and u gotta realize dat...u think u are able to fools other by ur "pro template" i think ur making the fools out of ur self!

um not done yet so dun cry and close the windows kay sayang? wub.gif

did u know by edit the copyright picture to vector graphic image (u gotta know how to) it will become fully urs? changing the color by pressing ctrl +U (hue and saturation in psd) also can become urs....no need to be over paranoid bout this thingy

ever heard of malaysia boleh? laugh.gif


by now assuming ur confident level dropping abit...yeah? no worries...here is whut u should do when u lack of ideas!

1-u need a revision like books (i recommend web page index vol 1-5...only 80+ at kinokunikayawtfever)

2-brain storm wiff ur frens while yam cha also good...ask them whut /how /why

3-surf the web look at others flower power shop design

4-do i need to share everything? hehehehehh laugh.gif i smoke sweed stuff!




bottom line, u only can improve in design by

1 think out of the box

2 try sumthing new...play around wiff the color ( etsuko whuts the website link bout the color thingy? u know the slider type of thing..post it here as i lost mine...good for color coordination...thanx in advance)

3 to make a ribbon i believe u need to use the gradient tool...how to? figure it out

4 envy the others! dats the key to success!




um done here...all the best to u 2 become a professional designer...pls take my honest word for ur own good and in da future, ditch the taking self pride thingy...so childish and u will never go anywhere wiff that attitude...

i like ur blog aniway....clean and straight forward especially ur color thumbup.gif

sumhow it just blend smile.gif

...maybe sumday u can teach me how to use css....?

till here...lastly for all malaysian local computer graphix designer

BE ORIGINAL!

 

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