I am using sc2replayed. Here is a replay of me playing a late late night custom melee game and forgetting to macro! I was yelling at myself when I was watching this.. lol

http://www.sc2replayed.com/replays/98621-1...oss-lost-temple

Detail:PvT I was going 3 gate robo and T was going 3 rack MMM

Question: What did I did wrong beside forgetting to macro?

Your early build is kind of a problem. 8 pylon is not a good no. go for 9 pylon ....and then try make probes 1st before chrono boost...boost is vry important @ early stage....next~ always see your minerals at that stage.....by about 100 mineral, you already can pull 1 probe to choke and build gateway ...you pull your probe exactly at 150 minerals...which is too late....vry vulnurable to early push ....ou wow ....you better familiarize with 1 BO 1st ...either the 1 you made, or the 1 you follow.

Note that always keep an eye for your mineral .....Smoothen your build order is the most important thing rite now ....Macro > micro

4:58... btw , you and your opp is not korean or high level player ....so no need that much of scouting ...esp opp is terran ...the only thing you want to care is proxy stargate -- Since the spawning position is better for air ....Terran does not need to proxy stargate. Hence, just take xel naga is enuf : )

9.00-10.00 The main mistake here is your immortal unable to do anything .....until the last 3 mara >.< ...

At this stage, I would switch tech to void ray ...it is too obvious your opp doesnt have any AA unit .....

10.59 - AIm SCV ...it will stop the process of making missile turret, den you can atk supply or tech lab of the wall barrack ...There is alternative here.....You can expand as well, since you able to take down the last drop ship which has marauder in there..It gives you significant lead. 3gate robo push most important unit is immortal to tank the tank and mara. Actually your attack could win , if you send your immortal up the ram 1st, Hit the depot --> straight go for tank ...your army is much more bigger as you can seen with obs

16.00 I want to say ur lucky =,=" ..he dint target fire your collosus ...or else your collosus down !

Later, with 2 base, you actually for for 6-8 gateway with 1 robo ....

@ war ....I dont see how u gonna lose the war .....just target fire tank with COLLOSUS only .....

Tips/or not --> hold ctrl and left click collosus, so that you only pick collosus for target firing ....and minor microing~ Once your collosus up ....ur dont really fear much .....sieged tank is only usefull when ur army is clump up ...so simply, after pre concave, sieged wont help much .....add some zealot to your army composition. It tanks well agaisnt marauder ...

Thanks a lot man. Will try to work on it.. Your grammar is not that bad. LoL I think I improve a bit, just played vs a plati zerg player..

http://www.sc2replayed.com/replays/99067-1...t-temple#rd:dna

Macro was better this game since I was sober. But lost A LOT of void ray due to lack of micro~ Did i improve a bit? I did notice that I forgot to upgrade wepon +1 for zelots.

1.03 Advices : pull your probe at 70 mineral if your bulding pylon at choke, 80-90 for near base pylon
For PvZ, it is better to have choke walling. It is kind of important to block the choke from speedling. Once speedling got into
your base, you will having trouble defending ur probes. Note that probes is more expensive den zergling (probes mines mineral)
For each lose of probes, about 150 mineral is lost (from my experience)

I think ur pylon is kind of early ...if your producing zealot from gateway early ...den 15 pylon will be more smooth

ur 3rd pylon can be placed at about 22 supply ....it is more smooth from my experience

For the 1st wave of zealot , their queen is gonna kiting your zealot. You actually can take your wounded zealot hit the DRONES
(since 1 of your zealot can hit queen @ a time)

Drones kill is very important. You able to kill 2 queen. which give you lead of 300 minerals + few zergling/drones = much more advantages than losing few zealots (4? 400)

With the lead, Artosis said, it is better to expand to further your league. Nice for making Void Ray is made when saw opp tech roach thou. For that build, mass up your army seems to easier to win.

9.00Not really a good thing to expand and attack @ the same time. It delays your reinforcement . Queen is not that important to kill at this war, it has much less dps den roach !!

Advice : kite your land unit to allow your land unit survive from roach/zergling while VR do the killing job.
Switch to collosus is better then Carrier? the zerg has hyralisk which is strong : )
It just preferences i guess. Like how whitera win with carrier agaisnt Zerg hydralisk.

Alternatively I would stop VR production and then go to 8 gateway . (2 base = 8 gateway) ....then win with mass unit.
Once you expand, it is advisable to get a forge and cannon to defense from counter rush.