In Summary: check your language. Grammar error is obvious here and it leaves a bad mark from the get go. It also doesn't highlight your character strengths

In Experience: You listed no experience. You listed jobs you did. But I don't see what did you do there, what did you accomplished, what did you experienced.

Additional Info: Don't list your salary expectations

I think you should discard the "additional information". Those are only revealed during an interview. You will risk having your resume rejected if you provide too much information.

Besides, your experience is not detailed enough, you should list down what you did as a clerk for example.

People want to see the impact you made in your resume. What have yoy achieved?

Also, discard the language (just like additional info), its a waste  of space.

Keep your resume less than 2 pages.