Can someone help review my resume?

I got work as an ACCA student at a huge hospitality/gambling company, but resigned to finish my exams.

I no longer get any calls(from worthwhile companies, its usually just small companies offering me rm2500 for a 2-3man job)(money is not an issue but if they're paying that low for a jobscope like that, 99% of the times the previous employee fucked things up)



https://www.docdroid.net/NajiRS2/resume-john-john.pdf

Disclaimer : Im not fluent in mandarin, its actually Malay.


At this point I'm contemplating to just remove work experience and get into trainee programs as an acca fresh grad

How do you do that in jobstreet? Upload a different resume each time before applying to a new ad?

• Played an active role in the restructuring process of the whole finance department, directly liaising to the finance manager and assistant Vice-president as one of the representatives
• Major achievement: Detected a RM20,000 deficit in a hotel’s cash from food revenue over a month that happened due to a system bug, and subsequently worked together with the bank to regain the money for the company
• Used Excel’s various tools to shorten a work that took a previous worker half a day, down to one hour
• Provided daily reconciliations for hospitality and food revenue to various payments
• Tracked all credit cards and online payments for the various hotels belonging to Genting

Would this be better?

I do have experience in performing refunds for grievance and fraud cases, So i guess it can be argued for customers satisfaction but its pretty minor compared to my jobscope, I only do it maybe 1 day per month.

Should i put it in?