She could have written more specifically about her job skill and the experience from her training period is definitely worth mentioning in details it all of them are relevant to the job....
This looks like a general resume and it seems that she doesn't have any plans regarding the jobs she wants... She mentioned basic computer skills but how basic is her basic? Knowing how to start/close a program? She mentioned her extra skills like good at teaching, outgoing and flexible... Again, why she said she is good at things she said? No examples... I am a fresh graduate with little experience is not advised to be mentioned because in some employers eye, you may seemed like you have low self esteem...
About the rest, I can say that she miss details and details is important...
Anyways, this is just my opinion... Perhaps you can wait for answers from more experienced ppl like joblisted or dreamer
Aug 21 2005, 06:51 PM
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