Bro, is this taken at 11mm?
I find that the distortion behind seems to be a bit bad, was it possible to zoom in a little to maybe 13-14mm, then step backwards by a few steps and move the models forward as well. Not sure if this will work, but tbh, the distortion is quite distracting.

Apart from that, as Freddy mentioned, try using a smaller aperture and the flash seems a little harsh...

Hi Pedagang, i have some comments on both the pics.

For the first pic, the front bokeh doesn't really work well imho.
I feel it would have been better if you could close down your aperture to make the whole image sharp.
The statue bokeh-ed kind causes a distraction more than an attraction to me.
And if you could, step back another few steps, get a wider field of view and put in more of the lake/river below.

For the 2nd pic, the bokeh is rather distracting.
Apart from that, sharpness is lacking on your focussed subjects, maybe this is due to the color balance where the subject tends to blend into the background.
You might need some sharpening work on this.

Bro, despite being photoshopped, both pics doesn't look "wow" to me.
Try to study more on composition, that will be the first step to a good picture.

Keep on trying, as you progress, you'll see the changes and you'll find it a very pleasant and enjoyable journey to see yourself grow...

Colours look pretty washed out to me...
Lacking in contrast and saturation.

Or is this intended by putting a white layer overcast over the original photo to make it some sorta dreamy kind of feel?