harsh comment:

well actually its my first try drawing 100% background.
me now me sucks.i has a sadding nao

both of the left & right arms looks weird ..especially the thumb area (it looks like there's no thumb ..just 4 finger without palm)
the tail looks weird, snake don't supposed to show its bottom part (the yellow part) like that (at the end) ...it looks weird for me seriously

uhh....I'm a noob commenting on someone who can draw

This post has been edited by merru: Sep 25 2011, 01:45 PM

add those chamber stone like these



to fix the perspective maybe will better?

Ah, finally finished something...



A few mistakes and rushed work here and there, but alas, haven't done such decent artwork for quite a long time...
Welp, time to finish Sakula commission.

i like this kind of hair reflection, not so "wet" or "oily", duno sempat change the madoka hair reflection to that or not? XD

I've changed the background, so its not just gonna be the hair, there's gonna be a bit overhaul on most of the shading.

there still 4 more in lines

and the luka hand i think looks something wrong.. her fingers i think xD

here is the line for kyoko.

american ninja

agito finish all 4 edy? can pass to me or to missingno directly edy

nice stuff there agito

woah, nice~

i'm sorry nichol pls dont kill me for posting it here



hggghhh nichol doodles xD

I see what you did there.jpg



This post has been edited by Nichol90: Sep 27 2011, 12:55 AM

body okay! xD face still need to fix eye one~ i still like the doodle eye hahaha xD that one looks like bad guy xD its good sharp.. erm i think maybe the eyes is not er.. panjang enuff xD i mean.. the one u draw is this long the eye "-" should make it longer like this "_" okla example. i lazy to simulate by drawing =( my drawing sux

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Added on September 27, 2011, 1:18 amon another thought.. maybe u should just stick with the doodle face and using that new body u draw i think should be looking okay xD

This post has been edited by sakuradesune: Sep 27 2011, 01:18 AM

Done with Homura...I think...

oh lol u start with the one that rough sketch xD

the face looks like something wrong but i dunno wut @_@"

Hmm...I didn't see anything wrong, but if you could be more specific I could fix it right away!

i think is not "akemi homura" -ish enough....

should be half open eyes.