deadline is 31 october 2011. if i can get 60 artworks that is. if no, then deadline might extend. depends xD but i do hope can get 60 artworks by 31 october

hei its look good. just the color of character not 'timbul?' enuff. it blends with the background. and she looks like falling xD

maybe if the left arm arched a bit higher and back might do the trick since it is from that perspective? just my opinion tho... me oso sometimes fail anatomy one

Ah, you mean the contrast ka? ahhhh I knew I forgot to fix something. lol@the falling part - that was not was I intended at all lolololol
Thank you!

I tried tweaking the arm's position like you mentioned, and it does seem more natural that way. Thanks~~
I don't think you have to be master of anatomy to tell what looks weird and what doesn't.

draw more nichol xD i like ur drawing~~

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Added on September 19, 2011, 11:06 pmi dunno to teka

This post has been edited by sakuradesune: Sep 19 2011, 11:07 PM

macam forehead hilang aje...or too low.

and long face is manly
if that is your style then leave it hehe... XD

but the forehead cant be ignore XD

why does that looks like TERA's Castanics?

This post has been edited by merru: Sep 19 2011, 11:46 PM

somehow that remind me of some batwoman or something xD

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 23 2011, 02:02 PM

erm.. lizard girl? xD

forehead line too low, snake too slim, due to the pattern also makes me feel like paper snake body xD
you are doing top down angle right?

Edit: man, next time check your spoiler tag

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 24 2011, 01:52 PM

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Echidna_%28mythology%29

forehead:always can fix with the pawa of liquify filter!
slim: i use cobra as reference ,from above cobra looks slim and leper

face:its not like i like long face or anything,its just like long face gives realistic/mature/western feeling.
example:here


bout the spoiler code sorry i type the code instead of clicking on the menu

This post has been edited by syurgatertinggi: Sep 24 2011, 04:56 PM

oh snake xD

naah... your body precisely should be looks like centipede more than snake

things i wont change:

first the hand,she holds it with 4 fingers when im sketching,looks more stylish
the snake belly pattern,i thing v pattern looks cool rather than generic lines

other things like her forehead maybe i would change.

agito doesnt mean the pattern style i think. he mean the spaces between the pattern. its too far from each other since its almost to the tip.

the hand i also agree with agito. it look awkward like that. if u still want to do it like that, make the pole bigger. nobody holding something heavy not fully grab xD that style macam holding a paper

but but she is a monster!



fixed things:
forehead
spacing thingy
bigger tail
face

got 2 whirlpool in the river D: