Yeah, nice idea.. actually sadako popping out of a well from high angle also nice, but done that before.
Let me try sketch it out.. if it looks nice maybe I'll do another toilet monster from some horror movie/folklore.

I actually did sketch out 'hantu kopek' the malaysian ghost... but stretched/hanging anime boobs just don't look nice, y'know? LOLZ.

yes, it looks good. have you decided on the background yet?

This post has been edited by sadako-chan: Jun 11 2011, 11:18 PM

NO... the detail already killing me.
at most i just fill sky with cloud only since qilin cab stepping on cloud what... the original concept is her hair with rainbow colour + cloudy feel.

Seems like you got your background set. Me, I'm thinking of drawing something that actually interacts with the background.. so far that is too much work for me to commit ATM. The toilet monster akaname actually gave me a chance to draw something simple and learn to construct backgrounds, so I'm going to work on that, hopefully, unless there's too many errors that I have to abandon it.

I also noticed I forgot to draw the toilet bowl cover.. it should be propped up since she's coming out the toilet bowl.. ah silly me... >_> No wonder I felt something was missing near the flush tank area.

This post has been edited by sadako-chan: Jun 11 2011, 11:33 PM

here is the Qilin which inspired me... oh wait.... look at mine.... need refine then...
*facepalm....

lol

tiny detail never kill me
because this minor detail make our work looks awesome!

and your kirin already looks good,have oriental feelin on it!

and looks like you also walk the path as same as me,the path of badass armor + moe face!

btw kirin cant gold in color meh?

did you watch garo?if not search google for "garo's horse gouten" and you can look at gouten's leg,really impressive details!

i prefer rainbow colour
i never watch garo but i think i saw it is somewhere since i m in kamen rider thread too.... i like SIC too XD

but once again i prefer to the previous reference picture colour scheme since it can bring out the oriental feel.

wow cool! quite fast! lol. moe enuff already. haha. doesnt need to stick with moe so much but must looks awesome! xD
i think u need to fix the hair. not the coloring part but the fluffyness. doesnt seem balance to me. maybe over fluffy xD her breast seem something wrong. maybe my eyes #_# feel macam saggy xD

toilet monster seem ok with me except the toilet bowl part. there is 2 lid right? the inner lid seem not 'timbul'. looks flat there like it is melekat with the bowl. and yeah like u say u forgot the upper lid xD

sadako seem a few fixes needed to be made. is the eye memang like that memang not balance? xD the right hand seem flat for the fingers. butt seem quite big there or the baju seem too bulky for bottom part, either one of it. most probably because of the bulky looks. though this one maybe just my problem. need to ask others 1st xD


everything looks awesome already except the stomach part below xD i think doesnt looks balance with the tail. the tail on the attached part seem bigger then the stomach below.

This post has been edited by sakuradesune: Jun 12 2011, 01:18 AM

Cool, I'll start fixing it then colour then.


I sort of made it so that one eye she open smaller than the other, I thought it was rather cute that way.. the right hand yeah, It looks flat.. nothing major though, as I only need to move the line a bit so the last finger overlaps it.
The clothes is bulky because it's loose. If you want form fitting, then I'll fix it up.

This post has been edited by sadako-chan: Jun 12 2011, 01:15 AM

hair-denied,i like em fluffy

fuwa fuwa hair!

breast-believe me ive done many re-check,there is nothing wrong with it

sadako:

wait, i just realize the monster body seem a bit small for that big head. maybe u can bring out the head out of the bowl, like its in front of the bowl (the neck is on the edge of the bowl, chest part somewhat on top of the bowl). so can lengthen the body there and somewhat looks zooming a bit.

oh i got a feeling u making sadako eyes like that for that purpose but somehow it wasnt come out correctly. not sure how to fix that though >_<
about the loose cloth, i think its good as long the coloring part later can show that is the purpose.

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Added on June 12, 2011, 1:27 amif you like it fluffy, make it balance then. doesnt seem balance to me for left and right. unless u trying to make it looks like blown by winds. though the way the hair wave doesnt seem so like that.

lol the breast maybe just my eyes then =/

This post has been edited by sakuradesune: Jun 12 2011, 01:27 AM

chest area i think well duno, leave it or what i duno haha... i also see same thing, maybe the "pointy" thing makes the nipper point outward.

and the hair volume is too much XD
that's not fluffy.

ya its windblown
you can compare the original sketch with this one for reference

really meh?
hmm lets ignore the hair first for now,as dat hair took me 30mins+ to finish.

i mean look at the realistic-ness

so let me rethink bout the hair,penat pun x hilang lagi lol

envy you guys ;_; i sketch also took me like hours?

NOTICE : this has nothing to do with monster





hmm, time to look into some monster ideas, maybe i'll do pumpkins monster

yo sakula,boleh nampak cyber/robotic tak?


idea for cybernatic-dragon-moe-girl suddenly hit my cranium

lol ok kot. still havent think the right title for it >_>"

Sakura, I use tablet also very slow, that's why I stick with pencil. But if want very clean lineart, tablet is the way to go. Unipen isn't forgiving when making mistakes, unlike on computer.
BTW, may i suggest doodling ideas beforehand? that's what I do usually to get ideas or forms.

i sketch use pencil. and it took me hours. =3= i iz damn newbie ;__;

Heh. one thing about sketching is not to worry about the initial lines and constantly erasing. make sure you get the shape right, then erase.. and redraw. I used to use a lot of the eraser also when I initially started drawing.. sketching also take 3-6hrs.. lol

Quickie cincai colouring. fixed the eyes. The clothes, I removed some of the wrinkles so it doesn't look so baggy. the lower part supposed to be a bit loose because she pulled it up a bit to dip her legs.


I think I overedited the eyes.. damn.. looks like I might have to redraw the entire face to salvage it.
That's what happens when I make the eyes the same size as the other.. lol.. looks a bit senget.

later when pickup the pen I will have to start on the slow process of linearting the whole thing..

@Agito.. I've modified it the toilet monster already. Since she's a monster that has to travel through the toilet pathways, it's obvious she can fit her entire body into the toilet, so what's showing out of the toilet are her head and arms. I thought about making it such that the butt is showing, but it would look like she is 'menungging', with her butt up in the air. I'll fix up some more and make it more apparent.

This post has been edited by sadako-chan: Jun 12 2011, 03:32 AM

oh i just realize the sleeve on her left hand, looks 'thick'. maybe need to mend that. hmm