QUOTE(vinothrao84 @ May 19 2009, 07:50 PM)
the new 1 is dammm nice....
thanks for the comment..

Added on May 19, 2009, 11:19 pmQUOTE(mi-g @ May 19 2009, 08:01 PM)
new 1 is better... but why use raptor? i think not so suitable lah.. try another plane

im going to use Sukhoi to represent Malaysia air force.

thanks.
Added on May 19, 2009, 11:21 pmQUOTE(golvin @ May 19 2009, 08:07 PM)
Great design. If there's anything that I can comment on, it would be the colour of the tagline "Nurturing Your Fleet" and other texts.
Consider changing the colour of your tagline, especially the end of 'nurturing' and beginning of 'your' there. The white colour makes it not quite readable.
Other content texts are quite small and cluttered. Do consider to make the font bigger, or increase the line spacing, or increase the character spacing to make the contents easier to read. The page in the mockup doesn't have much contents, therefore I think you can generously use bigger fonts. Being a reader, I find myself not quite interested in reading the contents, probably because they are not easy to read. You also may highlight the keywords in the texts to help reading.
wah,thanks for all your feedback bro,hehe..will work on that.

Added on May 19, 2009, 11:23 pmQUOTE(etsuko @ May 19 2009, 09:17 PM)
1. You may want to make the menu a little more obvious - try same text size as the logo.
2. As much as Malaysian's dislike the idea of their website being too textie, it's a key to basic SEO. So fill up the services description.
Overall, the new layout definitely improves the current in terms of structure and clarity.
I wonder what's with the army these days. They all want to renew their website. Just recently I got an army enquiry too. Now waiting on their response.

1.yeah,copied that!
2.Can u explain the basic SEO ? Im new with this thing. Thanks.
Hope they call u soon,haha..Its time to change la bro.

Added on May 19, 2009, 11:25 pmQUOTE(B-Mecha @ May 19 2009, 09:55 PM)
overall it is pretty neat n clean. i have a few suggestion for this design.
1. the main navi need to be more obvious, currently it looks like some random floating text. maybe add an icon/bullet in front of each text will be good
2. the plane is a bit too close to the main navi, maybe shift it a bit or make it smaller. personally i prefer a bright blue sky than sunset for this design. blue sky (with some cloud) will make it looks much positive and it suites the font colour

3. i saw the paper texture for the content area, but the tear edges doesnt seems nice cos the rest of the design is more towards "clean and neat". maybe a clean cut paper will be better?
4. the text "nurturing..." gradient is a bit weird, maybe use blue >> slightly darker blue or white >> light grey and some subtle drop shadow.
nice effort, hope my suggestion will helps.
thanks bro,will post the new layout after finish.
we also working on the 2nd and 3rd option for customer to choose.
This post has been edited by maryjane9996: May 19 2009, 11:25 PM