QUOTE(dishwasher @ Oct 19 2013, 02:32 PM)
Don't get me wrong. George Martin has done a great deal to bring fantasy back to the forefront of fiction. He is a capable writer, and his ability to tell a good story is top notch. I enjoyed the first three books of aSoIaF greatly, and reread them multiple times while waiting for the forth book. His old short stories were amazing, as were books like Fevre Dream and Dying of the Light.
A Feast for Crows, however, was frankly, disappointing. Martin seems to have lost his sense of pacing. Instead of keeping everything tight and moving the story forward, he meanders with subplots, minor characters, and doesn't seem to know how to advance his story to the next point. He is an 'exploratory' sort of writer; he probably has a few milestones he aims to hit, but otherwise he has no concrete idea on how to get there. The fact that he took so long to write book four and five is an indication of this; more than once, he has admitted to throwing out huge chunks of work because it simply went nowhere.
My worry is that the aSoIaF series will become yet another WoT. No one, not even the biggest fans, will call the middle part of WoT good books. They were boring as hell and felt pointless. I'm hoping for something more like the Malazan books, with tightly paced plotlines, events galore, and enough 'what the hell just happened?' moments to keep me turning the pages.
You are correct. GRRM has said even said so himself with his famous gardener vs architect line.
“I think there are two types of writers, the architects and the gardeners. The architects plan everything ahead of time, like an architect building a house. They know how many rooms are going to be in the house, what kind of roof they're going to have, where the wires are going to run, what kind of plumbing there's going to be. They have the whole thing designed and blueprinted out before they even nail the first board up. The gardeners dig a hole, drop in a seed and water it. They kind of know what seed it is, they know if planted a fantasy seed or mystery seed or whatever. But as the plant comes up and they water it, they don't know how many branches it's going to have, they find out as it grows. And I'm much more a gardener than an architect.” - GRRM
Having said that, I don't think aSoIaF will turn out like WoT for two reasons:
1. GRRM has also "completed" the story in his head. He has said so himself. He already knows the fate of all the characters. What holds him up is actually tying everything together and to bring closure to the many minor plots.
2. This is probably the more important; the HBO show. There no deal in place that states that forces HBO to wait for the books. The execs already know how the story ends so they may actually overtake him which is something GRRM is very worried about. GRRM has not promised a certain number of books but he is trying his level best to finish it with the next two books because he knows he's running out of time.
Personally, I think we'll see 3 more books - The Winds of Winter (which is about halfway done) and A Dream of Spring which I think will be divided into a Part I and Part II (with a massive fight scene in each book dealing with both major "wars"). But I don't think any of the books will be "slow" books.
You have to understand that book 4 and 5 were very difficult books to write for George because he had to tear up his script. The plan was to fast-forward 5 years into the future but only after writing hundreds of pages of text did he realize it didn't work. So the 4th and 5th books has a lot of character building (as opposed to the fast paced all-action nature of book 3). While many fans found it "slow", it's integral to the story so we understand the characters' evolution better heading into the climax of the series. He had to cover the character growth of so many major players that he needed TWO BOOKS within the same timeline.