tis is my 1st outing pic wit my frenz tat taken in cyberpark, cyberjaya... i m still a newbie in photography... n hope to learn more abt photo shooting n how to use photoshop in lyn... hope to hear some comments...

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This post has been edited by illegaldragon87: Sep 16 2008, 04:18 PM

1. your pic very big la. lucky i big screen to view
2. i only like #7 but if you crop it a little more then it'll be nicer. too much dark spaces around.
3. the rest you need to improve on composition and try to enhance the colors a bit.

oic... thanx for the comment.... may i kno wat can i do wit photoshop?? coz i usually oni use it to adjust the exposure and brightness oni.... others dun really kno... can any sifu guide me on tat??

Images > Adjustments > Curves

try that.

I know this has nothing to do with you, but I really really dislike putting words into pictures. It kinda ruins the whole "you-gotta-imagine-the-feeling" feeling.
Other than that, those pics are nice. Btw what model are you using?

#1 is very good use of leading lines. Unfortunately you have that overblown patch in the sky.

#4 your water lily is too much at the edge. got to move it up into the picture more.

#7 is very nice #8 will be good if that huge leaf is moved away leaving only the silhouette of the bamboo.

oic.... haha... mayb itz my fault to put caption in my pic... 1st time posting pic here.... will learn from mistake.... i m using nikon d40...

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Added on September 16, 2008, 7:25 amya i got the same thought wit u on #1... can teach me how i can enhance the pic?? coz i m not really good in phototshop.... thanx for ur comment bro...

This post has been edited by illegaldragon87: Sep 16 2008, 07:25 AM

#8 is good, will be best if you can include more bamboo leaves

ya... but guess the pic was destroyed by the huge leaves... coz i wasnt realise it till i look at the pic in my lappy... sigh~

may i ask all sifu wat setting do i need to set when i take pic at outdoor?? n wat to aware??

Haha my PP sucks so I cant help you in post procesing. Just be more careful next time during outing.

haha
change ya course 2 fcm la

love #7 the most.. but got abit of lens flare.

haha... wan me die meh... change edi need to start from foundation edi... wasted 3 years le...

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Added on September 19, 2008, 3:57 pmlol.... thanx... ya, i notice tat too... mayb becoz of the uv filter i bought... coz last time it wont happen... any idea from any sifu???

This post has been edited by illegaldragon87: Sep 19 2008, 03:57 PM

nice pic... which faculty are you in? perhaps we can go outting together...lol...

but now having industrial training...next sem free a bit...

i m foe gamma... u??

i'm foe beta...
maybe we should meet up one day and go outing together...^^

haha... sure... but i m still a newbie... need to learn more 1st oo...

newbie here too... ^^