A model's shooting organised by our local Photography Society,not the best but a very good start

1)One of my favourite of the series


2)i like the natural smile


3)


4)her smile oways sweet and natural


5)they are GOOD fren


6)Another favourite of mine

all picture has a nice bokeh

#4 , the head is chopped ?

#1 is great!
got similar ones with eye contact?

nice but too many head/body chopped off. did you crop the pictures or are they the original?

pic 5 is the bokeh for real? mind share the exif data?

pic 6 is really nice...ada feeling

i like number 6. seems like moody but she thinking of something. really good shot and good composition.

No 1 n no 6 looks good to me. Try putting sephia or black n white in ur pics, i bet it will look n feel different n nicer Bokehs were strong as well.

nice color but no headroom. i will apply no headroom only if i take extreme close up.

thanks 168257061,ya,head kena chopped,juz personal preference

thanks Lurker,glad u dare to give comments on my pics,'ll try to look for one with eye contact if got

kenji_britney,ya,they are mostly original or minor cropped but too bad most pics body/head chopped,will snap some "proper" portrait next shooting

orenzai,pic 5 bokeh looks fake mer? i didnt pay much attention on bokeh for that image but love they expression.The original Exif is 135mm,F5.6,1/166s @iso100.

thanks CrossFirE,ya,that's one of my favourite of the series

travis_ckf,ok,thanks for the advice,'ll try

R4yMoNd,thanks,comments noted

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Added on August 16, 2008, 6:03 pmok Lurker,u mean like this ?





This post has been edited by myqd: Aug 16 2008, 06:03 PM

wooo i like that one...the eyes so shiney and colorful

thanks to the model,she was standing inside the pool,her eye is colourful becos of the reflection of blue pool water

This post has been edited by myqd: Aug 18 2008, 01:14 PM

i like ur 1st potrait and the last one you just posted.anyway head cropping and body cropping is very subjective.i have no problem with your croppings especially no 4 which i think is a good expression.only that the hands is align to the border of the picture. nice work!

thank u very much zadan,thank u

#1 kinda reminds me of 1 of my shots before. As in the composition.

#6 is nice. Though I'd have shot with more of her hands as well to see what her fingers are telling us.

thanks etsuko,some update,"the colour contact lens series"

ok,update 2 more,the "colour's contact lens series" :mrgreen:

The fundamental mistake, chopping the poor girls face in pic #1. *dush* LOL!

opsss....elite is speaking

add two more,but in another event :

1)like the expression


2)i can feel the joy too


3)a pro pose