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Aug 8 2008, 01:44 AM, updated 18y ago
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Just got my camera last week. Decided to open up my gallery so that i can improve myself. C&C is welcome, but dont be too harsh on me
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Aug 8 2008, 01:48 AM
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fren, i edited your post cos your images weren't loading.
generally your composition idea is there, just need to fine tune. now your main problem is you put the images soooooooooooooo small. anyway, you have the A300 + 55-200, try to make use of it's zoom and SSS. lastly, i for one, can't comment in detail simply because I could see the pictures and they seem nice but it's not big enough to give you complete comment as observations are hampered by the size. |
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Aug 8 2008, 01:51 AM
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i'll try reupload tomorrow. i just link them to my flickr. dont kow how it turns up so small
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Aug 8 2008, 01:54 AM
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ok. try not to link the smaller pic.
click on your SET (assuming if you're using SET la) then click on one of the picture. then link to the larger picture example.... ![]() |
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Aug 8 2008, 02:57 AM
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Aug 8 2008, 03:25 AM
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k. good try. each post can have 10 images only.
to add more, you just click on the DO NOT COMBINE option. #1 is nice, perhaps try a more dramatic angle. #2 great idea but wall socket and part of the table spoil it. #3 nice #4 idea is there, try snapping the person from front. will look better. #5 bad - no subject, no composition #6 bad - no subject, no composition #7 play around with angle, adjust contrast a bit. got potential. #8 love it! #9 and #10 - weather didn't help you. #11 cincai shot |
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Aug 8 2008, 04:13 AM
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QUOTE(goldfries @ Aug 8 2008, 03:25 AM) k. good try. each post can have 10 images only. to add more, you just click on the DO NOT COMBINE option. #1 is nice, perhaps try a more dramatic angle. #2 great idea but wall socket and part of the table spoil it. #3 nice #4 idea is there, try snapping the person from front. will look better. #5 bad - no subject, no composition #6 bad - no subject, no composition #7 play around with angle, adjust contrast a bit. got potential. #8 love it! #9 and #10 - weather didn't help you. #11 cincai shot Not bad for your 1st week. Have you any artistic background? |
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