It is a bit too general and could probably use more insight as to why. Not badly written though. The English is better than half of my classes in college. You could also use some things like your personal experiences in the game or perhaps your views, if you have watched the MLG/CGS matches.

Are the matches viewer friendly? There are mixed opinions about it but for people that have played WoW (you can't ignore WoW's huge player base), you will easily be able to tell what is going on. However, if you haven't played it, you would be lost as to what is Cyclone.

The recent characters in the competitive Arena scene are somewhat funny though. Hafu's team getting the boot by MoB, only to come back to win the next tournament, also beating the team that replaced them in MoB. Now there is some drama with Serennia/Neilyo.

http://wowriot.gameriot.com/blogs/GameRiot-The-Blog/