You shouldn't base your experience on a private server! Just to iterate what has been said. The article is too generalised and IMHO don't see the point of it. Bits of this and that, i don't get the feel that you put some effort into it.

Affordability nowadays, even for student is a joke. Roughly RM50 a month; that's RM2 a day. Most students think of nothing spending much more than that. Granted exceptions do exist but it's their prerogative to decide priorities.

On a whole, it's merely an introduction. Just IMHO though Try harder.