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TSmyqd
post Jul 12 2008, 03:46 PM, updated 18y ago

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try out the new lens ( old lens actually,i SOLD b4 and get another one back ).

seldom try to PP with frames,need all u guys constructive's comments to improve,pls share ya biggrin.gif


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orenzai
post Jul 12 2008, 05:01 PM

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no offense but the artwork are not nice...gotta try different type of colors and etc
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post Jul 12 2008, 05:03 PM

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QUOTE(orenzai @ Jul 12 2008, 05:01 PM)
no offense but the artwork are not nice...gotta try different type of colors and etc
No problem,just pesonal preference biggrin.gif

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post Jul 12 2008, 05:05 PM

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about the photos...the first 2 shots and the last 2 shots have diff set of WB..
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post Jul 12 2008, 05:48 PM

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Granted i don't shoot models and know nuts about shooting them, but..

Model's expression is erm...well that's the reason why i don't like model shooting, photograher has to rely on the model's natural ability, which might or might not be good, thus your skill might be over 9000, but you'll still get a bad pic.

The frames, well, add curves to the edges, and instead of using black, use something more lively. Plus you can crop for better results.
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post Jul 12 2008, 05:58 PM

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orenzai,i shot using AWB,should be after some PP make them diff...

empire23,ur comments noted,i'm oways learning,thank u very much smile.gif
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post Jul 12 2008, 06:26 PM

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AWB usually not very jun..best if you are shooting in a scene, use one preset WB so that its consistent
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post Jul 12 2008, 07:08 PM

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i am a bit curious...how old is da model?

late 20s/early 30s?
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post Jul 12 2008, 07:25 PM

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orenzai,they actually looks the same b4 i PP them,so whatever preseted WB wont be cun after that la(juz personal preference lor) whistling.gif

mylo30,why,she looks so old kah ? tongue.gif or the pics looks old ? shocking.gif
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post Jul 12 2008, 07:34 PM

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just curious tongue.gif ..nothing much...don wana comments too much about models
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post Jul 12 2008, 08:23 PM

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QUOTE(mylo30 @ Jul 12 2008, 07:34 PM)
just curious  tongue.gif ..nothing much...don wana comments too much about models
Good rclxms.gif pls comment on pics indeed,thanks smile.gif
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post Jul 12 2008, 09:44 PM

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i have to say she was very stiff
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post Jul 12 2008, 11:42 PM

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why is the model looks like *not really in love* ?
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post Jul 13 2008, 10:47 AM

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pls respect the modal & comment on pictures ONLY smile.gif
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post Jul 13 2008, 11:00 AM

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hi there,

I am just curious, why the hand (right hand).... hmm.gif
you cropped it?

cheers!
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post Jul 13 2008, 11:36 AM

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QUOTE(uchan @ Jul 13 2008, 11:00 AM)

I am just curious, why the hand (right hand)....  hmm.gif
you cropped it?
No ler,i didnt cropped it,maybe it's the "plant" in front make it looks weired blush.gif

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post Jul 13 2008, 03:27 PM

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The bokeh is nice biggrin.gif
But, the composition of the pictures when you snapped here is not interesting enough. Perhaps you should try to follow the rule of thirds.
Besides, the purple color frame is distracting. I would prefer the frame without it.
Lastly, the model's expression doesn't suit the mood.
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post Jul 14 2008, 11:03 AM

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QUOTE(felicious @ Jul 13 2008, 03:27 PM)

But, the composition of the pictures when you snapped here is not interesting enough. Perhaps you should try to follow the rule of thirds.
Besides, the purple color frame is distracting. I would prefer the frame without it.
Lastly, the model's expression doesn't suit the mood.
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ok,comments noted,thanks.

...but,shooting portrait in " rules of 3rd "...emm....my opinion,not really neccessary lor hmm.gif


 

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