QUOTE(wayne322 @ May 17 2008, 01:01 PM)
Just buy an essay reference book and read it,note down all the sentences u like,and then use it to apply on ur essay writing,i think tis a good way to improve.
I would agree to this. Somehow I find that a reader can tell when the writer attempts to include something in his writing from a quote he obtained from somewhere out of context. It somehow disrupts the flow of the writing. One of the important points in writing is to ensure fluidity in it whereby a paragraph flows into another with consistency and integrity. Anyway this view was something shared by Ronald Dworkin in his chain novel theory