To my beloved Sean,

First gift from Nana to Sean. Gift which contents of love and best wishes from Nana, hopefully Sean will success in his up coming business.

After my training, finally I got part of my paid and bought a wallet (braun buffel) to my bf, we just started out for not long, 3 mnths +, and now I would like to give him the gift attached with a text, he is going to start out his own business soon, so would like to wish him but found out there are something wrong with my text. I have no idea how to make it better but I feel something wrong.

Help needed to make my text more presentable and I dont wish to pass him face to face, is there anyway I can surprise him? No creativity in this kind of things.

This post has been edited by feyhime: May 15 2008, 12:04 PM

Don'teven know how we start out, we never call each other in this way before, tried to do so, but find out weird. Untill now we still call each other by name, Sean, Nana, Sean, Nana So so so not romantic at all

Yea, that's why i am asking for opinion so I can improve my text

i used to deal with the media ppl, my text used to be formal. as i had said previously, I knew there was something wrong, but i dunno where your opinion is a good one for me to refer, thanks ya

I am even worst than a male

Lol.. You looks familiar gal.. i cant do so cause we both stay in diff place and i dun really know his housemate

Hmm.. This will pressure him??? I'm not sure.. I afraid it will. Cause he is doing hard to start out with his stuff rite now.


Plan to surprise him by next tuesday before I am back to hometown at wednesday Cause the current one he is using now he has been using it for long time and nt nice d. Since he gonna do his business soon, i bought him a leather one so its presentable, i think so

@whoopa : simple and nice. thanks.

will come out with something... hmm... let me see.. all here thanks ya... done d, show you all. but will not be vy vy romantic la... i'm not that kind after all

i such a failure for born to be a gal. Dare not le, later he will tease me one

my text will be:

To my love Sean,

Gift from Nana to Sean which content of love and best wishes. The wallet represents of Nana, a small gift but it could be something you gonna use everyday, so no matter where you've been, what you are facing, I will always be there with you. Last but not least, I would like to wish Sean success for your coming up business

Loving and wishing you well,
Nana

P/s: Don't try to be naughty, cause i am with you all the time

The one i bold sounds a bit formal, please help me to make it more sweet and lifely. Thanks again to all