QUOTE(alwaysCheap @ Apr 13 2008, 12:14 AM)
relax, those words are for business purposes only, meaningless
If it's meaningless, it shouldn't be there at the first place. Here are some comments from me,
1# The left and top is too empty. It could be better if you frame it more towards rightside and lower a bit.
2# Flash is too harsh, should frame it slightly lower till her knee so that the top of the picture won't be that empty
3# Composition isn't that interesting, the top is too empty. I would prefer it to be lower and slightly more to the left to frame her with the laptop as well.
4# You could have snapped at a better angle.
5# Hands chopped
p/s: Frankly, the frame is very distracting. Also, it'll look a lot nicer to me with the "Best Wedding & Event Photographer @ Subang Klang" thingy replaced with a humble watermark like what a Real Pro would do.
This post has been edited by vikingw2k: Apr 13 2008, 12:21 AM
Apr 13 2008, 12:19 AM
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