The colours seem a bit oversaturated on my monitor. Then again, this is my work monitor and its colours is known to be slightly different.

The composition could use a little work. You tried to fit everybody in the picture and the point of interest is lost on the viewer.

Did you bounce your flash? Because it looks like the flash is uneven. The areas closer to you looks way brighter than those further from you.

Judging from your first series, I know you can do better

yalar....the color...why all the photos look..erm...looks like the color is not right..or..am i the only one seeing it?

This is a few of my friend's wedding picture...

I name it Wedding at the garden...


-Nikon D40x
-Nikkor 70-300mm

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C&C appreciated


Bonus Picture

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This post has been edited by jaycz8: Jun 3 2008, 04:28 PM

bro jaycz8..nice pics u have here..
i'm interested in taking pic too, using my father's SLR (forgot the brand)...
still need a lot of time to get used of it

your lens... waaa... make me feel so little one...

but the picture like more focusing on the lady....

picture 33

is he holding the cigarette?

lol..dun think its very nice to show a picture of a muslim smoking

doesnt care muslim or not.. but i think it is unappropriate the wedding pics with ciggarets.. huauha

actually pic 33 is a candid photo...
the groom was focusing on another camera and i was at the back...
i know its a bit unappropriate, but this is one of a kind picture...
how often can u see groom holding a ciggy on his wedding day..

well for chinese i really do see quite frequently though but yeah lor groom and bride should not do so during their wedding day

This is my recent trip to Pulau Redang

Set up
Nikon D40x
18-55mm

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as usual, C&C appreciated

Very super Nikon Color!

38...might wanna try to inlude more of the face and less of the two things in front...subject is kinda small in this pic..
39 i bet theres a lot of blown highlights on the top?
40 why not try to place the woman in front of the sun(ie move to the 3 to get an angle)...the silhouette should be magnified a lil bit..

Any nose bleed photos from Redang?

orenzai-->38 was trying to be creative...just want show half face..40)noted...wil try to improve in the future..

virtualmetal-->hhahaha...sorry there's no nose bleed photos...everything in my camera is "clean"...