urghhhh,i forgot he's drawing a ghost rider one ...of course all black with simple outlining =="

spot on

well,flame effect wouldnt be so hard to ..work on it XD

today's sketch, theme is canyon waterfall + shade. (if colour sure got shade la)



This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 22 2011, 05:11 PM

basic colour oni? lazy to shade a ..

man this make me had a boner..LOL
jkjk

i think you really love gundam

finish it... hurry!!!

Nice stuff.

However, there's something that you should keep in mind.

- She's apparently on a higher ground compared to the river. Is that intentional? If it does, then you might want to consider adding a path or a pile of rocks to help the viewer to imagine how she gets there.

- Its unclear on what the bag leans on. Rocks, trees?

- The closer the it is to the camera, the more the colors get saturated. It goes otherwise on things far to the horizon.

- The horizon line is wrong, you might want to bring the horizon line on the same level as her eyes. Its evident since we can see the upper part of her thighs and shoulders. If you do, then you might want to extend the background a little bit more.

- You might want to get a custom brush for the leaves, since doing it one by one can be a pain in the arse. If you're willing to do so, then by all means.

That's my two cents. I'll comment more when its done. Oh by the way, you might want to add a brighter lightsource. Remember, sunlight is yellow, not white.

ya you are right, that's actually just WIP. in FB mr.gold fries also comment some same thing about colour saturation too XD. (distance confusion.)
but about the sunlight, can be white too. that is White Balance if you wan play with it XD...ya later on i should be add some yellowness on that.

other than that i need check back the error XD

can roughly draw the horizontal line you meant?

This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 23 2011, 10:55 PM

Ben.. never knew u terer drawing mang
i will gip it a try when not bz...

Here's the way i would put it. I wont break my brains trying to figure out where to put the rocks as part of the background, but i put alot of trees instead. haha. I use a normal dot point and set them really close together and dab them around with various green and yellow tones.

The red lines are the horizon line and vanishing lines too. I follow the vanishing points from the computer, and you did that spot on.

As i looked (and worked on it) i noticed that you have a double highlight on the character. Just so you know. And, i played around with some suitable shading tone for your character, and i tweaked to add some reds and purples in there, so that it would not look so bland. Oh, i added blues to the shadows as well.

Please pay attention to the water. Anything under the water becomes very saturated and remember, its not blue. The blue color comes from the sky, the water itself is transparent.

I had a little good fun tweaking your work. Keep it up!


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ohhh, actually i plant add a multiply layer to make a tree leaves shadow on the foreground. means the character is under trees XD

it looks much better after the tweaking. btw, the shadow on the character can be more contrast. bcoz it looks quite flat now. and also since character is under the tree, there will surely a lil bit of leaves reflection on the body and also some reflection of rock on the water.

Inachi > i dont want to play too much with it since it is her work. Gotta respect that. I just show what's need to be done, or some of it. I could go balls-out for it, but its not fair for her, no?

change something, light source change to the something sun rise or sun set there, environment change to waterfall foreground (will add some plant later) , left side duno put what, furtherest ground put err... dessert?

actually my first intention wanted to make a foreign place like great canyon, or something alien planet like Luke Skywalker's home

This post has been edited by Agito666: Aug 24 2011, 11:40 AM

aiyo..why change......
i thought you gonne keep that sacred place alike environment.
looks kinda weird to me,out of jungle suddenly a full sun setting .. i dont know..my opinion

So this is the place to share arts?Maan,I should post it here,but I already did that on my post,if I do it here again,no surprise factor anymore lol

This post has been edited by Adamiquesce: Aug 24 2011, 03:44 PM

duno this thread seems more like hand drawing arts thread. photograhpy manipulation i duno XD

unless you manipulate whole structure, not just adjust colour bar.