Definitely #6 is not right =d

part 1

2. cant see the bride's face...
3. the wall is too distracting...as goldfries said, it looks flawed
5. the face took up too much space(approx 1/3 of the image)
6. the face chopped off O.o cant find the subject

part 2
1. its nice but i think your exposure a lil bit on the bright side..
2. i like this one
8 an 9 nice

part 3
1. OOF i think, you focused on the brides tudung instead of the groom's eyes
2. the brides tudungs jewellery looks like dead pixels and its a lil too dark also
3. very nice compo...maybe can adjust the curve a bit so that the picture can be more punchy?
5 and 6 you captured the moment!!!

ps: these are just MO, you can ignore it if you disagree...

part 1
2. Im trying to show the kid's curiousity.

it doesnt mean you have to follow every rule, is it?
if you're keep doing it the right way, for me its going to be a common picture like the rest of wedding photos.
i dont need to show their faces ( sometimes ), because they already know who is it when they got their album.
i hope you know what i mean


part 3
1. yes i noticed that my bad.
2. lol, i didnt noticed that until you mentioned it good eyes!
3. is this more personal preferences or ... ? because it seems fine from here
4. that's called acting

hehehe, no sweat bro. you can come and criticize my photos any day
thanks!

This post has been edited by MR.Shiney: May 27 2008, 08:47 PM

haha...for that shot on number 3, i think maybe its coz of the low res picture..

yeah, all the wedding shots are at 7.1MP mode.
because the people that im working with said its enough even for an A4 print.

at least i can double my storage 14MP is a pain!

O.o thats bad news. 7.1mp is barely just enough for an A4 print... at least go up to 10mp safer mar

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Added on May 27, 2008, 9:10 pmerm..maybe its enough lar...but why buy a 14mp camera if you jsut wanna use 7.1mp? use back your d40!!

This post has been edited by orenzai: May 27 2008, 09:10 PM

hmm will check back, or will use it when i got myself a 4GB card its a huge difference ( in term of size )
Soon.. soon


This post has been edited by MR.Shiney: May 27 2008, 09:30 PM

haha...yeah i know 14mp should be at LEAST 8mb per pic... around there right?

look at the ceiling..

that one cant be helped lah.

@orenzai

yes, correct.

interested in your work. Can you cover Batu Pahat area?

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Added on May 28, 2008, 12:28 pmThe pelamin really look so familiar ...

omg, and the dress too. Maybe same mak andam, or was it pak andam

btw, bro Kuala Lipis is in Pahang la.

This post has been edited by azmihamzah: May 28 2008, 12:31 PM

Thanks

HAHAHA! Johor?! what was i thinking? thanks for noticing.

Batu Pahat? Honestly, i dont know where is that. If they can pick me up
at any KTM or LRT station then i can

Really? the mak andam is the beside the little girl in Part 1 number 3.

This post has been edited by MR.Shiney: May 28 2008, 01:35 PM

Batu Pahat is in Johor. No LRT goes there

Owh like that I'll ask the others to send me for the job.
eh, boleh ke

This post has been edited by MR.Shiney: May 28 2008, 01:37 PM

should send you for geography class first

PMed you the details

i hate geography i dont even know my place, how to know the outside world?

Here are some of my comments, the photos are great, but I feel they can be even better. Well just my 2 cents la

2

The focus is on the hand of the make up artist, focus on the girl who is looking at the make up artist would be a nicer candid shot. Who needs to see the make up artist hand in focus, is there anything special about her hand?

3

I like this view, seems like you are peeking into the room

6

Anything significant about the mics? Chopped off faces are alright if there is a meaning to it.

8

Just curious, the ring is placed on the right hand instead of the left hand?

9


10

Too many picture in a picture shot. But compared to #5 this is better because the h/p screen is properly exposed as compared to the on in #5.

1

The guy's face a little OOF?

4

Nothing technically wrong with this image but does the bride really want to see an enlarged version of her feet?

5

Crop the top part away, the ceiling with the leaking patch is awful and very distracting. If you can't crop it out, please use the clone tool in photoshop and clone away the patch.

This post has been edited by Mavik: May 29 2008, 06:05 PM

Ahhh Mavik, im glad you're here

owkay,

1) I admit, i focused it wrongly. i cant get the focus right because the girl start to noticed when i was going for a second try.
so i guess i post this one as my best catch.

6) This is the part where he said " saya blablabla <insert name> RM200 etc etc" i think it'll better if i caught him with his mouth was opened.

8) seriously, i dont know. All i know just shoot

4) i guess not

5) i think crop wont work for this one, its my mistake for leaving too much space above the couple.

Thanks Mavik, i really appreciate the comments

No problem mate! Soon you can start charging more already!

wont that more interesting during akad nikah, if you focused both kadi n the pengantin hand "bersalam" rather than the mic.