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post May 27 2008, 04:50 PM

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QUOTE(zio @ May 27 2008, 04:46 PM)
dude you need to number your pics tongue.gif its a bit hard to comment.
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QUOTE(soulfly @ May 27 2008, 04:48 PM)
nice photo!
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thanks!
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post May 27 2008, 05:06 PM

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QUOTE(goldfries @ May 27 2008, 04:55 PM)
loved the shots in general. great composition and color.

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i think if you have UWA lens, it'll add to the list of great photos.

keep up the good work!
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The wall, i want to try a composition that looks like someone is peeping through
the door and see whats the fuss inside the bride's room.

Alrite, the headless shots. that one was really really really on purpose.
I tried 3 shots to get that, seems like i got too many ( almost identical ) shots
with the heads on tongue.gif so i tried half of the bride's face just let the viewer know
there's more to it smile.gif err, i hope you get what i mean tongue.gif

Right side? biggrin.gif must be the girl's tudung.

Thanks goldfries. whats a UWA?


QUOTE(zio @ May 27 2008, 04:56 PM)
Ahh, now i can comment. Very nice and I am sure the couple will be happy.

My only gripe is with Part 1 - Pic 6 because I don't get it. The mics were largely uninteresting and since you chopped off the facial expression, I am not sure what to interpret from that.

And Part 3 - Pic 2 because the silhoutte because it is not a clean silhoutte. The light from the window revealed a bit of details on the face.

Lol thats my 2 cents smile.gif
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i answered that on goldfries biggrin.gif
maybe its just me, i liked that photo very much.

yeah, i was in a dilemma whether to make it a clean silhoutte or lose some and add some facial features, its like im trying
to catch the lights on the bride's face.

Thanks Zio! sorry i cant take you with me to the wedding sad.gif its not mine.

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post May 27 2008, 05:26 PM

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QUOTE(goldfries @ May 27 2008, 05:21 PM)
don't worry, as photographers - we're also people. our shots show what we like, not a representation of others. biggrin.gif

UWA - ultra wide angle.
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gotcha! wink.gif

owh, only if everything is free laugh.gif
i have to utilize what i got for now. UWA is pretty far to go. tongue.gif

QUOTE(soulfly @ May 27 2008, 05:21 PM)
uwa=ultra wide angle
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if the price is right, you'll receive my order. kekeke tongue.gif
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post May 27 2008, 08:44 PM

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QUOTE(orenzai @ May 27 2008, 08:25 PM)
part 1

2. cant see the bride's face...
3. the wall is too distracting...as goldfries said, it looks flawed
5. the face took up too much space(approx 1/3 of the image)
6. the face chopped off O.o cant find the subject

part 2
1. its nice but i think your exposure a lil bit on the bright side..
2. i like this one biggrin.gif
8 an 9 nice smile.gif

part 3
1. OOF i think, you focused on the brides tudung instead of the groom's eyes
2. the brides tudungs jewellery looks like dead pixels sweat.gif and its a lil too dark also
3. very nice compo...maybe can adjust the curve a bit so that the picture can be more punchy?
5 and 6 drool.gif you captured the moment!!!

ps: these are just MO, sweat.gif you can ignore it if you disagree... smile.gif
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part 1
2. Im trying to show the kid's curiousity.

it doesnt mean you have to follow every rule, is it? tongue.gif
if you're keep doing it the right way, for me its going to be a common picture like the rest of wedding photos.
i dont need to show their faces ( sometimes ), because they already know who is it when they got their album.
i hope you know what i mean smile.gif


part 3
1. yes i noticed that smile.gif my bad.
2. lol, i didnt noticed that until you mentioned it tongue.gif good eyes!
3. is this more personal preferences or ... ? because it seems fine from here smile.gif
4. that's called acting wink.gif

hehehe, no sweat bro. you can come and criticize my photos any day smile.gif
thanks! biggrin.gif

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post May 27 2008, 09:00 PM

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QUOTE(orenzai @ May 27 2008, 08:47 PM)
haha...for that shot on number 3, i think maybe its coz of the low res picture.. smile.gif
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yeah, all the wedding shots are at 7.1MP mode.
because the people that im working with said its enough even for an A4 print.

at least i can double my storage tongue.gif 14MP is a pain!
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QUOTE(orenzai @ May 27 2008, 09:09 PM)
O.o thats bad news. 7.1mp is barely just enough for an A4 print... at least go up to 10mp safer mar smile.gif

Added on May 27, 2008, 9:10 pmerm..maybe its enough lar...but why buy a 14mp camera if you jsut wanna use 7.1mp? use back your d40!! rclxm9.gif
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hmm hmm.gif will check back, or will use it when i got myself a 4GB card tongue.gif its a huge difference ( in term of size ) tongue.gif
Soon.. soon whistling.gif


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post May 28 2008, 01:32 AM

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QUOTE(d2z @ May 28 2008, 01:17 AM)
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look at the ceiling..  doh.gif
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that one cant be helped lah. sad.gif

@orenzai

yes, correct.
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post May 28 2008, 01:33 PM

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QUOTE(azmihamzah @ May 28 2008, 12:26 PM)
interested in your work. Can you cover Batu Pahat area?

Added on May 28, 2008, 12:28 pmThe pelamin really look so familiar biggrin.gif...

omg, and the dress too. Maybe same mak andam, or was it pak andam  tongue.gif

btw, bro Kuala Lipis is in Pahang la.
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HAHAHA! Johor?! what was i thinking? laugh.gif thanks for noticing. tongue.gif

Batu Pahat? Honestly, i dont know where is that. If they can pick me up
at any KTM or LRT station then i can tongue.gif

Really? the mak andam is the beside the little girl in Part 1 number 3.

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post May 28 2008, 01:37 PM

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QUOTE(zio @ May 28 2008, 01:35 PM)
Batu Pahat is in Johor. tongue.gif No LRT goes there tongue.gif
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Owh like that I'll ask the others to send me for the job. smile.gif
eh, boleh ke laugh.gif doh.gif

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post May 28 2008, 02:22 PM

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QUOTE(azmihamzah @ May 28 2008, 02:10 PM)
should send you for geography class first  whistling.gif

PMed you the details smile.gif
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i hate geography tongue.gif i dont even know my place, how to know the outside world? tongue.gif
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QUOTE(Mavik @ May 29 2008, 06:03 PM)
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Ahhh Mavik, im glad you're here smile.gif

owkay,

1) I admit, i focused it wrongly. i cant get the focus right because the girl start to noticed when i was going for a second try.
so i guess i post this one as my best catch.

6) This is the part where he said " saya blablabla <insert name> RM200 etc etc" i think it'll better if i caught him with his mouth was opened.

8) seriously, i dont know. All i know just shoot tongue.gif

4) i guess not sweat.gif

5) i think crop wont work for this one, its my mistake for leaving too much space above the couple.

Thanks Mavik, i really appreciate the comments biggrin.gif
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post Jun 2 2008, 01:07 AM

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Freeze

Today i just finished my wedding shoot at Bangi, after that a friend of mine
ask me out to The Curve and i shot this. No post processing was done with all
three shots.

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true sony colors! tongue.gif
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post Jun 2 2008, 02:13 PM

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QUOTE(168257061 @ Jun 2 2008, 08:44 AM)
wow... whats tho setting for those ?
cant read through exif.
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Camera: Sony DSLR-A350
Exposure: 0.01 sec (1/100)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 70 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Exposure Bias: 0/10 EV
Flash: Flash fired

here it is smile.gif

QUOTE(jsc_tidus @ Jun 2 2008, 01:16 PM)
use slower shutter speed la, then u got the dreamy effect..
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that is YOUR preference. can show me yours?

to think of slowing down the shutter,
the water will be blurry and i cant see the fountain texture.
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QUOTE(vikingw2k @ Jun 2 2008, 02:19 PM)
Chill down dude, he's just unclear what a fast and slow shutterspeed can do smile.gif
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tongue.gif i actually dont mind comments, but about personal preferences its a totally different story.
he is clear, he said use slower shutter for more dreamier effect.

and i dont like people calling themselves a noob! tongue.gif
they can do much more, if they're willing to.
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QUOTE(jsc_tidus @ Jun 3 2008, 02:24 PM)
waa bro, no harm done la, just putting my thoughts.. yes i am clear, maybe i'm just into those dreamy effect, however love the freeze shots of yours  doh.gif
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relax, im a bit warmed up pressure here and there. you dont need to say you liked it.
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post Jun 14 2008, 05:06 PM

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Before and After

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I was bored and dug up my old wedding photos, here's the before and after edit.
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QUOTE(orenzai @ Jun 15 2008, 12:14 PM)
hello there,
for the droplet shots.. i like the freezing droplets but somehow the gold plated background is distracting me..i am having a hard time to focus on the droplets as the golden shiny background is distracting me... just MO biggrin.gif

for that wedding shot, i suggest you try to not clip the highlights too much lor... its a lil too saturated for me... i prefer if the shot was just a WB tweak to make it warmer coz the shot perfectly fine to me smile.gif why fix something that aint spoiled right  wink.gif
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okay,
wedding shots. Its not what i've done right, but to look good. Its not about sharpness, colors, and details at all. Although i did try to
loose details at minimum. If you noticed i did some Gaussian blurry effect to give it a glow effect. Im trying to make it even better.
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QUOTE(orenzai @ Jun 15 2008, 07:42 PM)
doh.gif i knew you will be particular about that word... laugh.gif i no spell wrong ler... look at dictionary tongue.gif well i guess its preferential about those editing then...i personally dont like to edit the photos from the original much... smile.gif hope to see more from you
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yup, its sorta different when it comes to edited photos. well, its aite laugh.gif
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