Lol you know whats your first mistake?
Its uploading a 25mb file into rapidshyt!!! hahaha!! Luckily i have premium account, so i could still download it xD


ok here goes, (keep in mind ive never heard slashs version before, i only know the original song)
lack of high notes wasn't a problem, but the bends are. Maybe that can be excused since it was done on bass. Some parts were kept original and you improvised a little here and there which is good, but it felt like you're not doing enough. Something like, you try to improvise, but it didn't really come out right. Thats what i felt.
Also, having done on bass, i should expect a bass rendition of the song rather than a "guitar-like" version. That being said, there wasn't any bass effect or bass style to it at all. It sounded very... guitar. Personally i don't like that. Bass should sound like bass.
Overall, i think youve done a fairly good job considering it was done on random. But i think it can be improved alot more than this.

But thats just my opinion. Keep Trying!! xD

Oops i almost commented it for a guitar >.>