I just bought my D40 last month at Photo Selangor , before this im using Nikon F55 and Sony Cybershot only .. so enjoy my humble shot and dont forget to C&C it .. thanks !


[ foto #1 ]



EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : F5.3
S/Speed : 1/60secs
ISO : 400
W/B : auto

[ foto #2 ]



EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : F5.6
S/Speed : 1/25
ISO : 1600
W/B : auto

[ foto #3 ]



EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : 9.00
S/Speed : 1/320 seconds
ISO : 200
W/B : auto

edit : brightness and contrass + watermark

[ foto #4 ]



Tajuk : Jernih air
Keterangan : titisan air dari paip , time ni tgh tolong mak basuh sayur ..

EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture :5.60
S/Speed :1/500 seconds
ISO : 200
W/B : 200

This post has been edited by bluestolks: Oct 23 2007, 01:47 AM

wat's the feel/perspective of jumping from digicam to dslr?`



ps` the catz looks wild yet fierce`

hmmm...

1. the cat is too soft...something wrong with the compo

2. lens caps ...but next time try to compo it in the middle a bit

3. this one ok...but if the sky blue...sure nice one

4. i dunno about others...but to me the background spoil the picture leh...

thanks for d C&C !

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Added on October 23, 2007, 6:20 pm[B/W]



Title : Along the corridor of glory

EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : F7.1
S/Speed : 1/200
ISO : 200
W/B : auto

This post has been edited by bluestolks: Oct 23 2007, 06:20 PM

hihi...
d40 kaki here also...
hope my comments will be taken constructively...
foto 3, i would recommend if you used the Rule of the Thirds...
the BW was not bad...

Here's some tips. Use lowest ISO if you can afford it. For sharp pictures back to back, use a smaller aperture such as f11 if you can afford it. I think that your shutter speed is overkill for most of the pictures

Lastly, when you caption your pictures, think of the viewer. Can he/she connect the caption with the picture? I don't see what's so glorious about the corridor. Is it an important institution?

yeah ... my bad , thats my school actually ..

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Added on October 24, 2007, 3:00 amhaha .. thanks for the C&C , hope can learn from u one day ..

This post has been edited by bluestolks: Oct 24 2007, 03:00 AM

#1, #2 and #4 just isn't right. not some nice photos.

#3 is nice.

EXIF, not EXIFF.

actually picture #4 has potential. you just have to work on the composition.

1. since you're shooting a tap, try not to cut it off unless you know how to cut it off nicely.
2. you might say your composition is the droplet but if that's so, then look at your picture and see how the droplet stands out from other stuff in the picture. does it stand out? no it doesn't
3. composition, background, distractions, many other stuff.

yes, you have the idea already. you just have to make effort to compose.

try something like this



it's not a Picasso but as you can see, the subject is the tap with it's flowing water. no distractions. remember that the background SHOULD help the subject, not distract.

wah ! what a nice C&C i got here ! thanks goldfries , i will try my best next time

hehe...very nice explanation from goldfries...
i would like to share my tap photo and hope the sifus can comment on it also...

orenzai, the pic is nice too! just that the cut-off tap isn't helpful.

furthemore the buttom 3/4 of the picture like does nothing other than showing the pipe and grass.

i'm sure it'll look nice if you could capture the tap as a whole. before cutting a subject off, do consider how it'll affect the experience of viewing.

LIGHT TRAIL

[ foto #1 ]
Tajuk : Light Trail I



EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : F7.1
S/Speed : 5 Sec
ISO : 200
W/B : Manual


[ foto #2 ]
Tajuk : Light Trail II



EXIFF DATA:-
Aperture : F7.1
S/Speed : 5 Sec
ISO : 200
W/B : Manual

EXIF, not EXIFF.

nice shots. just that for the 2nd shot the black bar at the bottom is a distraction.

lol .. sorry i already made template , i will change the EXIF

ahhh .. i forgot to crop ! duhh , anyway thanks goldfries