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TSBlueSilver
post Jul 30 2007, 04:55 PM, updated 19y ago

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Hi all,

This is my first recording. Please leave me some comments on how to improve my skills. Oh and if anyone can tell me what song is this that would be great too. notworthy.gif

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post Jul 30 2007, 05:26 PM

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Your playing was spot on!

If really want to nit-pick, maybe the starting wasn't very stable tempo-wise and isn't as clean (some fret noise), but the rest was really good...
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post Jul 30 2007, 05:35 PM

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Not bad! The notes were plucked pretty evenly in terms of volume dynamics and when the melody comes in, it does sound as if 2 guitars are playing different parts.

Oh, nice tone too... you're playing the CPX right? thumbup.gif
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post Jul 30 2007, 05:45 PM

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QUOTE(Rossie @ Jul 30 2007, 05:26 PM)
Your playing was spot on!

If really want to nit-pick, maybe the starting wasn't very stable tempo-wise and isn't as clean (some fret noise), but the rest was really good...
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Ah i was nervous. sweat.gif I'll try to lose the fret noise. Thanks for the comment. smile.gif


Added on July 30, 2007, 5:46 pm
QUOTE(led_zep_freak @ Jul 30 2007, 05:35 PM)
Not bad! The notes were plucked pretty evenly in terms of volume dynamics and when the melody comes in, it does sound as if 2 guitars are playing different parts.

Oh, nice tone too... you're playing the CPX right? thumbup.gif
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Yes i used the CPX. blush.gif

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post Jul 30 2007, 05:48 PM

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QUOTE(BlueSilver @ Jul 30 2007, 04:55 PM)
Hi all,

This is my first recording. Please leave me some comments on how to improve my skills. Oh and if anyone can tell me what song is this that would be great too. notworthy.gif

Attached File  Try_1.mp3 ( 1.02mb ) Number of downloads: 189

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nicely done... rclxms.gif rclxms.gif

what guitar u're using again?
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:01 PM

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it's the Yamaha CPX-8 and thanks for the comment blush.gif
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:04 PM

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do your fingers have callouses? usually those causes string noise.
one way to reduce it is to dip fingers in warm water to soften them up.
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:09 PM

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oh yes, ok i'll deep them in warm water before playing. But wouldn't it be more painful when they're soft??
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:18 PM

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pain is relative la.
which would you rather have?
a little pain from playing guitar?
or pulling out your fingernails?

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post Jul 30 2007, 06:28 PM

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*ouch definitely not pulling out my fingernail :S
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:31 PM

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for me i like the fret noise sound tongue.gif
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post Jul 30 2007, 06:52 PM

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nice tune thou...i would have been better if there is less staccato note n more legato...keep it up.. thumbup.gif
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post Jul 30 2007, 08:24 PM

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don't need to pull out nails. . . just cut deep into the meat. . . lolz

i do that xD

the piano style
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post Jul 30 2007, 08:50 PM

 
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nicely played! much better than what i can play on the acoustic sweat.gif
what did you use to record? very clear
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post Jul 30 2007, 09:35 PM

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I dunno why...... it reminds me of Black Sabbath's Fluff......
Sounds great though......

What did you use to record btw?
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post Jul 30 2007, 09:42 PM

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yeah the recording was clean and good =D

direct pc? or miked?
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post Jul 30 2007, 09:56 PM

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nice !

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post Jul 30 2007, 10:38 PM

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i plug in my guitar to my microcube. Then from the rec out to my laptop's mic input. I used sonicstage mastering studio. I was worried that it might come out not too good the quality i mean. But it came out not too bad eh? smile.gif
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post Jul 31 2007, 04:19 PM

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QUOTE(BlueSilver @ Jul 30 2007, 10:38 PM)
i plug in my guitar to my microcube. Then from the rec out to my laptop's mic input. I used sonicstage mastering studio. I was worried that it might come out not too good the quality i mean. But it came out not too bad eh? smile.gif
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wow... not too bad for a recording on a laptop... i've always thought recording on laptops won't work cause i tried once and i got tons of latency...
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post Jul 31 2007, 04:36 PM

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oh man bluesilver u made my day nice...the tune keeps ringing in my head now.any lyrics to the song? can sing also n record in too wanna hear.. blush.gif
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post Jul 31 2007, 04:38 PM

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yeah i was surprised with the quality too. smile.gif


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QUOTE(Beatmasta @ Jul 31 2007, 04:36 PM)
oh man bluesilver u made my day nice...the tune keeps ringing in my head now.any lyrics to the song? can sing also n record in too wanna hear.. blush.gif
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err... i can't sing. If i sing, it will rain. sad.gif Later no more made your day lor. blush.gif

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wow, through laptop mic-in? i thought you're using some other recording device, nice tone you got there

next time try to record some vocals along with your guitar biggrin.gif
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post Jul 31 2007, 04:40 PM

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QUOTE(asura_86 @ Jul 31 2007, 04:38 PM)
wow, through laptop mic-in? i thought you're using some other recording device, nice tone you got there

next time try to record some vocals along with your guitar biggrin.gif
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Thanks for the comment. I can't sing. sad.gif Frogs sing better than me. blush.gif
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post Jul 31 2007, 06:24 PM

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wow
really nice sounding there

i kinda like the fret noise, makes it sound more acoustic =p
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post Jul 31 2007, 06:42 PM

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thanks. some people like the fret noise some dont. But all is good. blush.gif
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post Jul 31 2007, 11:20 PM

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Hey , nice melody u hv there , i am planning to get an acoustic guitar , which one are u using?
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post Jul 31 2007, 11:25 PM

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Woah... I thought it was a UX2! Sounds fantastic. Good job.....


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post Jul 31 2007, 11:40 PM

 
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QUOTE(-YS- @ Jul 31 2007, 11:20 PM)
Hey , nice melody u hv there , i am planning to get an acoustic guitar , which one are u using?
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QUOTE(BlueSilver @ Jul 30 2007, 06:01 PM)
it's the Yamaha CPX-8 and thanks for the comment blush.gif
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did you read the previous posts ? she posted it more than once..
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post Aug 1 2007, 10:22 AM

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thanks sweet tooth blush.gif

I actually have one more song recorded. It's on my blog. Do leave comments if you happen to visit my blog ya. Thanks. notworthy.gif

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post Aug 1 2007, 05:15 PM

 
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i can't even begin recording... all the string noise will kill everyone doh.gif
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post Aug 1 2007, 05:53 PM

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hey sweet tooth, never try never know right? wink.gif
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post Aug 1 2007, 06:07 PM

 
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actually i tried recording once with a mic, my mic lousy so the sound was pretty blurry and grainy with background noise. that was with my sister's classical guitar.

just to let you know, i used to play metal songs on my sisters classical before i got my electric guitar sweat.gif it was funny tuning to c(saggy strings!) and palm muting on a classical guitar with nylon strings sweat.gif

lucky i didn't record that smile.gif
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post Aug 1 2007, 06:16 PM

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i cannot play metal songs. Too difficult for me. Classical is also too difficult for me. So i just do what i can. blush.gif sigh~
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post Aug 1 2007, 08:41 PM

 
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i also cannot play wan.. syiok sendiri nia doh.gif
i gotta work on my acoustic skills leh wanna be able to play like you thumbup.gif
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post Aug 1 2007, 09:31 PM

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ooo... i'm also still learning. blush.gif what song are you currently learning?
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post Aug 1 2007, 09:52 PM

 
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on acoustic? nothing actually.. dunno any songs except ben's b****es - berbulu laugh.gif
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post Aug 2 2007, 11:58 AM

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laugh.gif i'm looking forward to hear it soon. wink.gif
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post Aug 2 2007, 07:15 PM

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Hey! Nice one. Went to your blog too. Keep playing! biggrin.gif
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Hi bluesilver, thk for ur info , i am from kedah too , same as SilverIsle, where are u currently?
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post Aug 2 2007, 11:29 PM

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SilverIsle and YS from Kedah?? Ooo... maybe we can jam sometimes? I'm in Sungai Petani. smile.gif
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sungai petani? thats where the damn black metal controversy started right? tongue.gif
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post Aug 3 2007, 02:42 AM

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Wah, SP is so near to my house , SilverIsle is from Alor Setar, i am Gurun but studied in Alor Setar , currently i am in gurun now...


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QUOTE(Everdying @ Aug 2 2007, 11:30 PM)
sungai petani? thats where the damn black metal controversy started right? tongue.gif
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post Aug 3 2007, 11:09 AM

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how nice if we could jam together and exchange ideas biggrin.gif It'll be fun but i don't quite know how to jam with an acoustic guitar. blush.gif
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jam with an acoustic guitar?

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post Aug 3 2007, 02:27 PM

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i cannot see it. sad.gif
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post Aug 3 2007, 02:48 PM

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Well, what kinda sound/feel were you trying you trying to achieve?
Can't really comment if I don't know what you actually intended.

Technically, you're good enough for this simple piece so you should focus more on the music, less on the playing.
Although, you could work on smoother chord changes.

The softly plucked strings lends some delicacy... has a really folk-ish quality. Makes me think of idling days in a peaceful town. If that's close to what you wanted then it's good but if it was some song about war and destruction... doh.gif
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post Aug 3 2007, 03:15 PM

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i honestly don't know what sound or feel i was trying to achieve. As long as it's soothing to the ears i guess. Could you explain more on "focus more on the music, less on the playing"? notworthy.gif thanks. smile.gif
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post Aug 4 2007, 05:26 AM

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try pluck out the jazz chord rather than the normal chord..this will helps u improve alot ! nice record btw smile.gif
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post Aug 4 2007, 10:28 AM

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erm.. i don't know what are jazz chords blush.gif
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post Aug 4 2007, 11:27 AM

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LOL neither do I.
I think he meant using more jazz-sounding progessions? But that's not how the song is supposed to sound, isn't it.

Anyway about what I said earlier, I guess you can take it as "playing it like you mean it."
But since you didn't mean anything, you can disregard that.
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oh, i can understand what it means by "playing it like you mean it." smile.gif ok ok, i'll do better next time. Thank youuuuuu.... smile.gif

 

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