Haha that seconds im stunned, you should highlight the phrase kidding in white
No, actually i've press and listen it (luckily it plays straight to my media player) after that i went to sleep cause im tired that day, sorry.
Okay so i've listen to it again just now, and below are some of my comments and opinions about the track.
- Bass line needs to be more thumping and pounding.
- 1.10 theres some quality problem, not banging enough since this is kinda like an uplifting track.
- Piano melody build up and breakdown quite well produced.
- 2.49 breakdown sounds not that good, i suggest maybe you can try to change piano or violin melody.
- Starting from 3.31 till 4.00 is good if you can add more 'sounds and the breakdown-and-go stuff' pretty sure gonna have an amazing climax.
- 6.47 you should arrage it maybe to 5.47 for you to decrease the melody slowly at the end.
- You gotta work again at 7.17, it just doesnt really fit well.
- Overall a 3/5 rating for this track you've complely half way but i belive it can be more better.
The above is base on my individual comments and an average trance listener opinions, you can either accept or reject it. It took me about half an hour to listen and write about your track, you have to thank me!
This post has been edited by Vaiz: Jul 8 2008, 12:40 AM