Hmm, it look more like snap fitted than OOB.

If i were u, i'll redo it. Here's smthing i would do:
1. Sharpen the V-fin.
2. Cover seam lines.
3. Paint the whole kits.
4. Use inking method rather than gundam marker.
5. Color the Butterfly wing, and shield, (inking method too).

Juz my opinion, hope it will help u to improve.

this quite very very familiar.... 
MechaHerc did u take it from Zero G forum? and from a HG destiny thread?

  really mine..    lol
i think she meant tat time, dun use gundam marker panel lines to draw, instead use inking method...
means use enamel lining....
inking method = enamel lining.. 

Mmm.. if u are refering to no.4 ..
i think the one whose giving the opinion is referring on how to color the panel line..
and for panel lining a very fine brush + enamel would be the best compared to gundam marker..
if you dont understand what i mean..
just refer here --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LpXiwQnnJ3I
try to watch at minute 6:20.. 

Item Name  :  Mr.Hobby - Mr. Retarder Mild
Item Code  :  MRH-513967
Company  :  GUNZE SANGYO
Description  :  Mr.Hobby - Mr. Retarder Mild

Mr.Retarder Mild use to slow down the speed of dry of Thinners & Mr. Colors, smooth down brush strokes. It mixed with Mr. Color's thinners before use. Ratio= R1 = T9 Good for using hand brush.
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Item Name  :  Mr.Hobby - Mr. Color Thinner 110ml
Item Code  :  MRH-540222
Company  :  GUNZE SANGYO
Description  :  Mr.Hobby - Mr. Color Thinner 110ml

Only suitable or mix with Mr. Hobby's colors & Mr. Color Surfacer. Use to thinner colors & surfacer, good for modeling airbrushing.
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Item Name  :  Mr. Hobby - Hobby Color Thinner 400ml
Item Code  :  HC-519495
Company  :  GUNZE SANGYO
Description  :  Mr. Hobby - Hobby Color Thinner 400ml

Aqueous Color Thinner is a safe remover with a pleasant citrus scent. It dry slowly than others thinner to let you do the job right.

lol i forgot to tell him tat part!

bro u need to do some masking before u paint ur kit! It looks.......

ok for ur question the thinner with yellow label are thinner tat already mixed with retarded mild while the blue color one does not.
The eye part tried using some toothpick or needle or other stuff to color it

Well, for sure there can be a lot of improvement from what you've done

Ok, basically I guess the first thing that you can look at is probly your thinning ratio. What's the ratio of paint to thinner or water r u using?

Next will be brushes. What sort of brush r u using?

From what I can see of the pic (the red areas), your brush strokes r pretty crude, and the main causes of these are usually either wrong brush type, or wrong thinning ratio.

then 3rd question is, how many layers of paint did u apply?

if u're able to right, can u take a close up pic of a white area as well to post here? I can only make out the rough bits on the red part of the shield, but cant see the details of the white areas that well so cant comment on those yet.
to color the eyes, use a very very small brush I usually use a size 000 from Fabel Castel for this.

Its easier to classify paints by their cap... i assume u guys are using Gunze Sangyo's line of paints ...
Please note that the names are all based on the LABELS on the product... not on the description written in XL Shop !!!!!


Mr. Color ( lacquer based ) paint = Mohawk-shaped cap

1. Thinner that can be used :

Mr. Color Thinner 110 ml/250 ml/400 ml
Mr. Color Leveling Thinner 110 ml/400 ml




Hobby Color ( water based ) paint = FLAT shaped cap

1. Thinner that can be used :

Hobby Color Thinner 110 ml/400 ml



See the difference in the names ? hope this clears up some confusion.