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Andy's Photo Gallery, tweaking here and there
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Sep 9 2007, 01:19 AM
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Not enough emphasis was placed on the texts. Even though the pictures are nice but they fail in transmitting the message. They could be better.
The last picture could use a bit more DOF to get the left parrot's head in focus. Nice picture though.
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CompMac
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Sep 9 2007, 06:22 PM
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For the flowers...
#1 Could be used as background for wordings. Nothing special if on its own. #2 Chromatic abberation on the edge of the petals. #3 Seems to be a bit underexposed. #4 Also seems to be a bit underexposed.
For the second batch, the motorcycle is seriously underexposed. Nothing special on the Land Rover emblem furthermore with distracting reflections. The portrait has bleeding of colours and I think it's not a good post-processed picture. No message can be seen.
My 2 pence.
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CompMac
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Sep 9 2007, 11:40 PM
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QUOTE(Andy0625 @ Sep 9 2007, 10:44 PM) Thanks for sifu's comment , will brush up my skills along with sifu's tips.  I'm no sifu. I can't accept this title yet. Maybe in another 5 years time.
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