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 Andy's Photo Gallery, tweaking here and there

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post Sep 9 2007, 01:19 AM

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Not enough emphasis was placed on the texts. Even though the pictures are nice but they fail in transmitting the message. They could be better.

The last picture could use a bit more DOF to get the left parrot's head in focus. Nice picture though.
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post Sep 9 2007, 06:22 PM

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For the flowers...

#1 Could be used as background for wordings. Nothing special if on its own.
#2 Chromatic abberation on the edge of the petals.
#3 Seems to be a bit underexposed.
#4 Also seems to be a bit underexposed.

For the second batch, the motorcycle is seriously underexposed. Nothing special on the Land Rover emblem furthermore with distracting reflections. The portrait has bleeding of colours and I think it's not a good post-processed picture. No message can be seen.

My 2 pence.
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post Sep 9 2007, 11:40 PM

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QUOTE(Andy0625 @ Sep 9 2007, 10:44 PM)
Thanks for sifu's comment , will brush up my skills along with sifu's tips.  thumbup.gif
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I'm no sifu. I can't accept this title yet. Maybe in another 5 years time. notworthy.gif

 

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